Cyle Brooks
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Just a 21-year-old who loves writing scripts and composing music! I focus more on writing actions, comedies, and horrors. I also specialize in scripts that are ridiculous, over-the-top, or just straight-up insane.
Overall, Dipped and Died was a solid read for a sci-fi script in my opinion. The only things I would focus on is giving your story a tad bit more originality to make it stand out better as well as re-reading over the dialogue a bit more. Other than that, this script was fairly good!
All in all, this was a pretty neat first draft for your pilot episode of Miss Adventure. Whatever I mentioned above would be what I'd recommend checking out and revising for your next draft. Good luck!
After getting fed up with evil winning in the end of horror movies, a man decides to take matters into his own hands.
Carrie's week is going miserably and camp doesn't seem to help. Neither does the fact that there's a killer loose on the campgrounds hellbent on being remembered by his childhood bullies.
After dying in a car accident, Johnny Seth is about to face judgment, that is until Satan gets God's permission to bring Johnny back to life, only for his plan to go south.
The torment was too much for him to handle, and now he's gonna make sure everyone has a jolly good time!
A schizophrenic man loses his sanity after his singing audition for a talent show goes wrong.
Teens learn the hard way that if they don't comply and pass on the messages, they pay the price for breaking the link.
Slaying demons and kicking ass are his specialty.
Slaying demons and kicking ass are his specialty.
Hope you liked the first act, because now it's time for the grand finale!
A group of college students are rudely awakened by a trio of armed home invaders.
Has SVF finally met his match?
Has SVF finally met his match?
They may be cute, but they ain't cuddly.
A man deals with the consequences of his addictions in his personal and work life.
