Just a 21-year-old who loves writing scripts and composing music! I focus more on writing actions, comedies, and horrors. I also specialize in scripts that are ridiculous, over-the-top, or just straight-up insane.
Overall, Dipped and Died was a solid read for a sci-fi script in my opinion. The only things I would focus on is giving your story a tad bit more originality to make it stand out better as well as re-reading over the dialogue a bit more. Other than that, this script was fairly good!
All in all, this was a pretty neat first draft for your pilot episode of Miss Adventure. Whatever I mentioned above would be what I'd recommend checking out and revising for your next draft. Good luck!