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World War Time

By Justin Eastman

The United States' entire existence is at stake

Peer Rating: 13%
Industry Rating: N/A
1 Reviews | 19 pages | 1 year ago | Draft 1


When a Russian Scientist invents a time travel device all hell breaks loose

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Here were my thoughts on your script:

1. Concept - The concept isn't original really, but there's a ton of different ways this concept can be used and changed. However, this story went more basic.

2. Story - The story was very hard to follow along with unfortunately, mainly due to the fact that the formatting and dialogue were out of place and not done properly.

3. Structure - Some of the formatting was decent, like the action lines. Par...

1 year ago |
Cyle Brooks Top Reviewer

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