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#History #Sci-Fi/Fantasy #War

The United States' entire existence is at stake

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1 Reviews | 19 pages | 3 years ago | Draft 1
When a Russian Scientist invents a time travel device all hell breaks loose

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Here were my thoughts on your script:

1. Concept - The concept isn't original really, but there's a ton of different ways this concept can be used and changed. However, this story went more basic.

2. Story - The story was very hard to follow along with unfortunately, mainly due to the fact that the formatting and dialogue were out of place and not done properly.

3. Structure - Some of the formatting was decent, like the action lines. Par...

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