1. Concept - The concept isn't original really, but there's a ton of different ways this concept can be used and changed. However, this story went more basic.
2. Story - The story was very hard to follow along with unfortunately, mainly due to the fact that the formatting and dialogue were out of place and not done properly.
3. Structure - Some of the formatting was decent, like the action lines. Par...
A young German boy falls in love with a Jewish girl amidst a thriving swing culture and the impending Second World War that threatens to throw them apart.
A wealthy Spanish family fights to preserve Spain then supports an independent Mexico and finally defeats Santa Anna at San Jacinto in order to protect their lands, property and legacy.
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