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Thanks for your time and feedback. That was a quick brainstorm and 1 day draft for BBC Interconnected short competition. I didn`t have time to make it clearer that they weren`t divorced. It was a good exercise though. Thanks and best of luck with your projects.
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Elders Way short
Genre: Family,Drama
An elder woman struggles to connect with her family during the pandemic breakdown. Will the help come in time?
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Long Live The President short
Genre: Drama
In a revolutionary time, Sahar, a young nurse, finds herself face to face with the old dictator ruling the country after he fell ill and stepped into her emergency room, and must choose between saving him or killing him to save her country.
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Genre: Comedy,Romance,Action/Adventure
A socially-awkward hockey player is forced to relive the day of his championship game over and over again until he wins.
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Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Romance,Drama
In a world much like ours, a woman is pulled into events that will forever change her life on her 25th birthday.
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7 by 7: The Amorous Adventure of Husk Gentry short
Genre: Western
Are the man’s claims sunstroke ravings, fanciful imaginations, or actual events? Two cowboys can’t decide after hearing the story of his imprisonment for stud-services to seven beautiful women.
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Genre: Crime,Drama,Sci-Fi/Fantasy

In the afterlife between afterlives, a cynical demon attorney and a mysterious crime lord must join forces in the pursuit of redemption and revenge.
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Wetiko short
Genre: Drama
A road-movie short-film about Corona Virus following the life of three young adults who run away from their past.
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Mercy tv series
Genre: Crime,Drama,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
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I enjoyed this story and it was an easy read, obviously you have skills. I didn't realize it was a TV pilot until after I finished it, I thought it was a short. Either way I like the imagery of it being in purgatory and the mythical beings including your descriptions because I am a fan of all things sci fi and fantasy, period. I don't know about the long haul on the TV series idea because it seems you have set it up for most go to hell from that point and I am not sure how long that would hold my attention, sad stories all going to hell. But hey I don't know your long term vision and as said I like the story you wrote. The character Levi is a sad demon it seems longing for love and longing for a better win rate that seems impossible given the story I read and he has to continuously bear that and has become suicidal over it all. Maybe the way to resolve that doomed fate vision is to add a case he miraculously wins after the one he loses? Just a thought on that idea but I think without doing that the whole long haul is relentlessly sad and depressing for a TV series. That's what I am left with after reading what has been written thus far. I liked Hannah, Nova and the prosecutors you described and overall I had zero issues with your writing. It is creatively written with all the descriptions so the reader has the total vision without anything necessary being left out. I watched this movie by reading your script so I think you nailed that part. You also have all the rules of script writing down that is obvious and cheers to you for that as well. This might make a good feature if you can write it out giving Levi something big as his next case that as said, in the end, he may or may not get the win. Once again, just a thought on it. Good luck and write on...

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Genre: Drama
In a revolutionary time, Sahar, a young nurse, finds herself face to face with the old dictator ruling the country after he fell ill and stepped into her emergency room, and must choose between saving him or killing him to save her country.
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