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feature
Genre: Crime,Comedy
After a series of self-proclaimed visions, an ambitious DEA agent conscripts a group of felons to bring down a cartel of aspiring rappers.
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tv series
Genre: Comedy,Drama
A day-in-the-life pilot to a high school comedy that will map a naive freshman's many misadventures.
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5ive by 5ive short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Western
A scruffy man wanders into camp, seeking sustenance. He tells a fantastic story about his escape from a commune of five beautiful women and free love. Are his claims sunstroke ravings, fanciful imaginations, or actual events?
Michael Kospiah uploaded a feature screenplay
14 hours ago
Honey Mustard feature
Genre: Horror
A retro 80's style, home-invasion slasher about an unhinged waitress who stalks and torments a man and his family after not being tipped. But this isn't just any ordinary family.... Don't Breathe meets You're Next.
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feature
Genre: Horror,Thriller
When the elite S.T.A.R.S. team crash lands outside the mysterious Spencer Estate, they may have just found what is responsible for the cannibalistic murders plaguing Raccoon City.
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feature
Genre: Western
A Stranger with a sword and a Native American priest journey through Hell.
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feature
Genre: Crime,Comedy
After a series of self-proclaimed visions, an ambitious DEA agent conscripts a group of felons to bring down a cartel of aspiring rappers.
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21 hours ago
Top Shelf feature
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Action/Adventure
A socially-awkward hockey player is forced to relive the day of his championship game over and over again until he wins.
Rodrigo Cosme completed a review for
1 day ago
Resident Evil (2019) feature
Genre: Horror,Thriller
Review Rating:

I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT.

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Alex
Thanks for letting me know! I've uploaded a new draft with a PDF that appears to be working now. If you get back around to reading it, hope you enjoy!
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Eddie
I’m pretty sure this guy is just farming karma and not reviewing. He’s done the same thing about 5 times. He could just abandon it if they don’t open, but he wants the points.
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Rodrigo Cosme just claimed a review for a feature script
1 day ago
Resident Evil (2019) feature
Genre: Horror,Thriller
When the elite S.T.A.R.S. team crash lands outside the mysterious Spencer Estate, they may have just found what is responsible for the cannibalistic murders plaguing Raccoon City.
Rodrigo Cosme completed a review for
1 day ago
Vengeance Wore Black feature
Genre: Western,Drama,Thriller
Review Rating:

I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT.

Rodrigo Cosme just claimed a review for a feature script
1 day ago
Vengeance Wore Black feature
Genre: Western,Drama,Thriller
After cheating death several times, a gang of murderous outlaws is confident a holy relic will protect them from permanent harm, but when the Rider comes, seeking retribution, will death finally win this hand?
Keith St. Lawrence uploaded a feature screenplay
1 day ago
Them Wretched Souls feature
Genre: Western
A Stranger with a sword and a Native American priest journey through Hell.
Rodrigo Cosme completed a review for
1 day ago
The Reprobates feature
Genre: Crime,Comedy
Review Rating:

I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT.

Rodrigo Cosme just claimed a review for a feature script
1 day ago
The Reprobates feature
Genre: Crime,Comedy
After a series of self-proclaimed visions, an ambitious DEA agent conscripts a group of felons to bring down a cartel of aspiring rappers.
Rodrigo Cosme completed a review for
1 day ago
The Sacrifice short
Genre: Drama,Horror
Review Rating:

rodrigo.m.cosme@gmail.com First of all, I would like to remind the writer that I am no expert in either writing screenplays or reviewing them. This is simply my opinion and suggestions, therefore no professional observation on this work. The story is pretty well written, and the writer shows a great and wide vocabulary which always comes in handy when writing pretty much any genre. There is obviously not much character development, but that's because it's short, so that's OK. I just have two things to tell the writer to improve, but apart from that.¡: everything seems good enough. I think that "BATHROOM", "BEDROOM", "HALLWAY" and "KITCHEN" should be written as separate scenes (different sluglines for each). This just makes the script more readable and makes it look much more professional. Also, it's OK to write "KATHLEEN" in the character line before introducing her properly if it's just one dialogue box. I know, it may be hard to look at at first, but it's widely accepted within the screenwriting community. I really liked this story and was slightly disappointed to see it end like that. I got very inspired with new story ideas, some of which could be incorporated into this story. I was thinking that after this script we get a flashback of all the events leading up to this moment in the story. A message to the writer: please contact me (my email address is at the beginning and end of this review) so we can discuss these ideas; I'd love to share them with you. Thank you for reading through this long review. Please contact me at rodrigo.m.cosme@gmail.com if you have any questions. You can also contact me if you have any other (more general) questions and/or doubts about screenwriting. I will be more than pleased to help fellow screenwriters.

Rodrigo Cosme just claimed a review for a short script
1 day ago
The Sacrifice short
Genre: Drama,Horror
A young girl must make the ultimate sacrifice in order to appease the one she loves.

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