I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT.

I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT.

I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT. I AM SO SORRY TO INFORM THE WRITER THAT I COULD UNFORTUNATELY NOT OPEN THE PDF FILE OF THIS SCRIPT. THIS IS, THEREFORE, NOT A REVIEW. I HAD ALREADY CLAIMED IT BEFORE I FOUND OUT THAT I COULDN'T OPEN IT. THIS MAY BE EITHER BECAUSE THE SCRIPT WAS UPLOADED IN A FILE TYPE THAT IS NOT A PDF OR BECAUSE THERE IS SOME TECHNICAL PROBLEM ON MY SIDE. AGAIN, I AM VERY SORRY THAT THIS IS NOT ACTUALLY A REVIEW. THE LOGLINE AND SUMMARY I'VE ADDED TO THIS REVIEW ARE THE LOGLINE WRITTEN BY THE WRITER OF THIS SCRIPT.

rodrigo.m.cosme@gmail.com First of all, I would like to remind the writer that I am no expert in either writing screenplays or reviewing them. This is simply my opinion and suggestions, therefore no professional observation on this work. The story is pretty well written, and the writer shows a great and wide vocabulary which always comes in handy when writing pretty much any genre. There is obviously not much character development, but that's because it's short, so that's OK. I just have two things to tell the writer to improve, but apart from that.¡: everything seems good enough. I think that "BATHROOM", "BEDROOM", "HALLWAY" and "KITCHEN" should be written as separate scenes (different sluglines for each). This just makes the script more readable and makes it look much more professional. Also, it's OK to write "KATHLEEN" in the character line before introducing her properly if it's just one dialogue box. I know, it may be hard to look at at first, but it's widely accepted within the screenwriting community. I really liked this story and was slightly disappointed to see it end like that. I got very inspired with new story ideas, some of which could be incorporated into this story. I was thinking that after this script we get a flashback of all the events leading up to this moment in the story. A message to the writer: please contact me (my email address is at the beginning and end of this review) so we can discuss these ideas; I'd love to share them with you. Thank you for reading through this long review. Please contact me at rodrigo.m.cosme@gmail.com if you have any questions. You can also contact me if you have any other (more general) questions and/or doubts about screenwriting. I will be more than pleased to help fellow screenwriters.