Just a 21-year-old who loves writing scripts and composing music! I focus more on writing actions, comedies, and horrors. I also specialize in scripts that are ridiculous, over-the-top, or just straight-up insane.
All in all, this was a pretty neat first draft for your pilot episode of Miss Adventure. Whatever I mentioned above would be what I'd recommend checking out and revising for your next draft. Good luck!
This was a pretty neat little romantic short script you have written here and it's very clear that romance is right up your alley because you've done a great job yet again with it here. Good luck with your revisions and I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with next!