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Checkpoint Charlie

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By Nihal Harichurn
Animation,Drama,Comedy

A Russian-American teenager reluctantly teams up with a CIA agent, sent to protect him, to wreak havoc in the Eastern Bloc and find out about his parent's disappearance

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Peer Rating: 47%
Industry Rating: N/A
1 Reviews | 46 pages | 4 weeks ago | Draft 1

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Overall this was a fair first draft pilot episode for Checkpoint Charlie. For future revisions, I would recommend focusing on the dialogue and how it can build up your story and characters rather than just being filler or just a reason to slap the comedy label on it. Good luck!

3 weeks ago | read more...
Cyle Brooks Top Reviewer

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