Wanna See
0

Quite Beautiful

short
By Grant Miller
Horror

Everyone is telling him to look at the moon. Every instinct tells him not to.

Approved
Nominee
Draft #1
Peer Rating: 67%
Industry Rating: N/A
1 Reviews | 5 pages | 1 year ago | Draft 1

Summary

Everyone is telling him to look at the moon. Every instinct tells him not to.

Industry Reviews

Peer Reviews

Here were my thoughts on your script:

1. Concept - It's very strange to see a short script about people who look at the moon suddenly vanish into the sky. I like how it was similar to the apocalypse subgenre for horror, although it feels more fitting for thrillers.

2. Story - I liked the story mainly for its simplicity. It seems like you had fun writing this script and it goes to show that you don't have to have a crazy or complex story for...

1 year ago | read more...
Cyle Brooks Top Reviewer

Recommended for You

Slimy creatures haunt a young man's life, what to do?
The avid reading of the Book of Evils makes Tom to experience a nightmare. He is saved from that sleep by the calling of his name by Sarah and his neighbours
A troubled teen leaves a note for his parents.