1. Concept - It's very strange to see a short script about people who look at the moon suddenly vanish into the sky. I like how it was similar to the apocalypse subgenre for horror, although it feels more fitting for thrillers.
2. Story - I liked the story mainly for its simplicity. It seems like you had fun writing this script and it goes to show that you don't have to have a crazy or complex story for...
A college student is forced to take 8:00 AM classes for the first time in his life. He soon learns, however, that the consequences of sleep deprivation are far more serious than he could have ever imagined.
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