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#Crime #Thriller

By Marlon Schwiersch

A hitman is tasked by a mobster to retrieve stolen cash from the cartel, and has to make it back across the border to stay safe... (old and incomplete)

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1 Reviews | 26 pages | 3 years ago | Draft 1
#crime #thriller #action ##feature
After a deal gone wrong with a mobster and the cartel, the mobster hires a hitman to retrieve the stolen cash and kill anyone who stands in his way. However, with the cartel hot on his tail, he must make it back before he can be safe.

(DISCLAIMER: this is one of my very first scripts and it isn't finished so it probably isn't that good).

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Gunman, while incomplete, is still in decent condition
For being an incomplete script, this was actually a fun read. I'm hoping this will be completed someday and hopefully my feedback will help you with how to write it out. Good luck!
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