Here were my thoughts on your script:
1. Concept - I thought it was interesting to go for a couple moving to the mountains into a haunted house as the concept for a romantic thriller, but it can work if done right.
2. Story - The story was fairly simple, a tad of a slow burning story. However, my biggest complaint here is the ending where the two main characters almost do a role swap and for me, it doesn't work at all unfortunately.
3. S...