Dreams Come True - Part One: The Awakening of Dreamweaver feature
#Sci-Fi/Fantasy #Romance #Thriller
Arjun Kumar, an adopted orphan, gets a love dream. He later discovers that it was caused by a device invented by his biological father Devendra Varma, who got stuck in the dreamscape.
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111 pages |
2 years ago
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Draft 2
Arjun Kumar, an adopted orphan, gets a love dream. He later discovers that it was caused by a device invented by his biological father Devendra Varma, who got stuck in the dreamscape.
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Overall this was a decent attempt for a first draft for your script. I hope my feedback doesn't discourage you from working on this because I think with proper attention and rewrites, this script could be truly great. Good luck!
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