Michael Kibler

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A Saying in Iceland Draft #1

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When an impromptu trip goes horribly awry, a disheartened aspiring photographer develops a long distance relationship against the behest of his jealous ex-girlfriend.
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Torso Draft #1

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After a string of gruesome killings in Cleveland during the Great Depression, an alcoholic surgeon is interrogated for days on end by a law enforcement officer with a legendary reputation.
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Space Junk Draft #1

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An inquisitive alien teen and her awkwardly observant human boyfriend attempt to unravel the mysteries of each other's celestial bodies.
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Michael Kibler 3 days ago

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Space Junk short
Genre: Comedy,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
An inquisitive alien teen and her awkwardly observant human boyfriend attempt to unravel the mysteries of each other's celestial bodies.
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Space Junk short
Genre: Comedy,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
An inquisitive alien teen and her awkwardly observant human boyfriend attempt to unravel the mysteries of each other's celestial bodies.
MichaelKibler
Michael Kibler 1 week ago

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Space Junk short
Genre: Comedy,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
An inquisitive alien teen and her awkwardly observant human boyfriend attempt to unravel the mysteries of each other's celestial bodies.
MichaelKibler
Michael Kibler 1 year ago

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FROST feature
Genre: Horror,Mystery/Suspense
Rating: 13%
This reads like a novel, yet it is supposed to be a screenplay. The main culprit here in the review is your action lines. Action lines should be quick and precise. Instead of a bunch of sentences about a wintery night, simplify it. For example: EXT. FOREST - NIGHT Snow covers the ground under a full moon. That's it. The only things that should be us what is SEEN and HEARD. There should be no thoughts, smells, or taste. And let the actors and directors do their jobs. The dialogue is another thing. Everyone sounds the same. And the dialogue seems clunky alot of the time. Yes, there were some contractions used in sentences, but not nearly enough for it to sound real. With all of that said, I do not like giving bad reviews, but I have to give an honest one. Personally, I would recommend looking at other screenplays, action lines specifically. and get rid of all of the unnecessary sequences. This will shorten your page length, but make reading it so much easier. I would be willing to do another review on the next draft once this is fixed. Good luck on future drafts and reviews of your script.
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Michael Kibler 1 year ago

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FROST feature
Genre: Horror,Mystery/Suspense
In 1922, A lonely man rides back home for Christmas on a cold dark woods. He is forced to take a diversion where he meets a woman who maybe not what she says.
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Michael Kibler 1 year ago

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Torso short
Genre: Crime,History,Mystery/Suspense
After a string of gruesome killings in Cleveland during the Great Depression, an alcoholic surgeon is interrogated for days on end by a law enforcement officer with a legendary reputation.
MichaelKibler
Michael Kibler 1 year ago

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Torso short
Genre: Crime,History,Mystery/Suspense
After a string of gruesome killings in Cleveland during the Great Depression, an alcoholic surgeon is interrogated for days on end by a law enforcement officer with a legendary reputation.
MichaelKibler
Michael Kibler 1 year ago

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Space In Between Us short
Genre: Drama
Rating: 33%
The concept of going back and forth between the meet cute and the end of the line between them is interesting. This is true in a lot of relationships where people do drift apart. Effectively the honeymoon phase ending and stuck in a rut or the relationship running it's course. This however is a double-edged sword. You attempted to use flashbacks. Flashbacks should be used sparingly and only when necessary, which they were not formatted correctly in the script as well as a few other areas of dialogue lines in action lines. Your concept is solid if you choose to build upon it. The whiplash of constantly jumping back and forth is impeding the flow of the script. I would however cut back the number of flashbacks by combining them into bigger ones or taking a few out together. All of that said, it is merely a suggestion and do with it what you will. Good luck on future drafts and reviews of your script.
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Michael Kibler 1 year ago

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A Saying in Iceland feature
Genre: Drama,Romance
When an impromptu trip goes horribly awry, a disheartened aspiring photographer develops a long distance relationship against the behest of his jealous ex-girlfriend.
MichaelKibler
Michael Kibler 1 year ago

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Space In Between Us short
Genre: Drama
A glimpse into certain parts of Sarah and John's relationship, but they start to grow apart.