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Dreary Night Draft #1

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After receiving a potential life-defining letter, a yound woman sets to ignore the consequences of her action for one last night before facing ugly truths
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Kirby Gilshamoch 2 years ago

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Dreary Night short
Genre: Drama
After receiving a potential life-defining letter, a yound woman sets to ignore the consequences of her action for one last night before facing ugly truths
KirbyGilshamoch
Kirby Gilshamoch 2 years ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

Dreary Night short
Genre: Drama
After receiving a potential life-defining letter, a yound woman sets to ignore the consequences of her action for one last night before facing ugly truths
KirbyGilshamoch
Kirby Gilshamoch 2 years ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

Dreary Night short
Genre: Drama
After receiving a potential life-defining letter, a yound woman sets to ignore the consequences of her action for one last night before facing ugly truths
KirbyGilshamoch
Kirby Gilshamoch 2 years ago

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007: Origins: part one: Based on the story and characters of Ian Fleming short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
Rating: 40%
A lot of potential for separate Origin shorts for 007 (The parents/first day at M6/Blofeld/the orphanage). Currently, there seems to be too many conflict that do not lead to a resolution by the end of the short. The dialogue is slightly confusing during the interaction between Blofeld and Goldfinger, especially about the mole section (is there more than one mole, and what of M?) The link between MI6 day and the orphanage is not quite clear and steps away from the tension that was built in the previous scene. During the kinapping, it is not clear where the nurse is located as she would have also heard the scream, while Bond was half asleep. Be careful with the syntax too as some words have typos (including Moneypenny for example)
KirbyGilshamoch
Kirby Gilshamoch 2 years ago

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007: Origins: part one: Based on the story and characters of Ian Fleming short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
When Bond is just a teen, he does not expect his life to change.
KirbyGilshamoch
Kirby Gilshamoch 3 years ago

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Dreary Night short
Genre: Drama
After receiving a potential life-defining letter, a yound woman sets to ignore the consequences of her action for one last night before facing ugly truths
KirbyGilshamoch
Kirby Gilshamoch 3 years ago

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