Dominique Colbert

Dominique C.

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RED Draft #3 television

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Poor Lisa. All she wanted to do was hang out with her cousin. Instead, she ended up in jail with no one to help her all because her cousin’s girlfriend decided to frame her but Lisa claims innocence. Is she innocent or guilty? You be the judge.
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Mumbling Sin

Mumbling Sin Draft #3 short

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A young woman is getting ready to fall back into a dangerous cycle when her inner demons come out to "save the day".
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Unknown Ambitions

Unknown Ambitions Draft #4 television

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When Aia, a young college student, has been chosen to go viral on social media, it has to be kept a secret. She must learn to balance her home life before her secret gets out.
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SVF: Reborn (First 15)
Vector
James Bond
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Dominique Colbert 3 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

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A Rogue Story television
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Thriller,Action/Adventure
Kal, a solitary thief, stumbles to find her place in a city ruled by crime. When destiny hurtles her toward a powerful wizard, and a barbarian with a dangerous secret, three rapscallions must band together to navigate a silent coup set in motion by an ancient evil.
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Dominique Colbert 3 years ago

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SVF: Reborn (First 15) short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Thriller
Rating: 53%
Hi, Cyle I really enjoyed getting to read your story and am excited with the direction you're going to take it. Here were my thoughts on your script: I noticed your script relies a lot on the visual aspect to help move the story along. (I like to do this as well) I do wish that in the first 5 pages, I was able to understand the relationship between SVF and the Lycan Cerberus a little more. It's clear they have fought each other before. Maybe if they had more banter before the battle would be interesting. Pages 5-6: I would make the scene a little steamier. It's not common for strippers to kiss their clients especially if they haven't met before. Do they have a history together? I would go back and read your pages out loud to see if you misspelled words or typed something else instead of what you meant to say. I would extend the dialogue a bit. What I mean by that is, when people are upset or angry, they need to add extra words/questions instead of getting straight to the point. I think it's good to space out the action a little bit. I know that this is a short film but it's okay to give the audience a longer break when it comes to action/fighting scenes. Personally, I think it has potential. It will be interesting to see where you will take SVF's character development. I would watch this in my spare time. Great work on your story. Hopefully, this review will be helpful for you! Best of Luck.
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Dominique Colbert 3 years ago

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SVF: Reborn (First 15) short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Thriller
Slaying demons and kicking ass are his specialty.
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Dominique Colbert 3 years ago

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Unknown Ambitions television
Genre: Drama
When Aia, a young college student, has been chosen to go viral on social media, it has to be kept a secret. She must learn to balance her home life before her secret gets out.
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Dominique Colbert 3 years ago

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Unknown Ambitions television
Genre: Drama
When Aia, a young college student, has been chosen to go viral on social media, it has to be kept a secret. She must learn to balance her home life before her secret gets out.
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Dominique Colbert 3 years ago

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Mumbling Sin short
Genre: Drama
A young woman is getting ready to fall back into a dangerous cycle when her inner demons come out to "save the day".
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Dominique Colbert 3 years ago

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RED television
Genre: Crime,Mystery/Suspense,Thriller
Poor Lisa. All she wanted to do was hang out with her cousin. Instead, she ended up in jail with no one to help her all because her cousin’s girlfriend decided to frame her but Lisa claims innocence. Is she innocent or guilty? You be the judge.
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Dominique Colbert 3 years ago

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Unknown Ambitions television
Genre: Drama
A young girl has been chosen to go viral but before she can do that, she must learn how to balance her life in the meantime.
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Dominique Colbert 3 years ago

uploaded a script.

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Unknown Ambitions television
Genre: Drama
A young girl has been chosen to go viral but before she can do that, she must learn how to balance her life in the meantime.
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Dominique Colbert 3 years ago

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RED television
Genre: Crime,Mystery/Suspense,Thriller
Poor Lisa. All she wanted to do was hang out with her cousin. Instead, she ended up in jail with no one to help her all because her cousin’s girlfriend decided to frame her but Lisa claims innocence. Is she innocent or guilty? You be the judge.