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Winner Draft #1
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2 Reviews |
88 pages |
5 months ago
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Draft 1
*Remake of an older script of the same name
A group of high school teens are targeted by a killer obsessed with music and must figure out a way to survive and take the killer down before he picks them all off.
Contains strong brutal horror violence, disturbing content, language throughout, sexual references and brief drug material.
A group of high school teens are targeted by a killer obsessed with music and must figure out a way to survive and take the killer down before he picks them all off.
Contains strong brutal horror violence, disturbing content, language throughout, sexual references and brief drug material.
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I was torn on one aspect. There were several themes that didn't feel realistic. For example, no one ever reached out to the police, the police never found the deteriorating body in the snare drum, our antagonist felt superhuman for the first 60% (I thought you were giving him almost mystical or supernatural powers like Jason or Freddie), and everyone automatically assumed that the killer was magically cured once he was subdued. On the other hand,...
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I like the lead antogonist right off the bat. Their words cut sharply and seem harmonious for a real effort at a believable and great character design. However, this focus on him seems to be the only thing sublimely in sync.
The lead antognist is easy to imagine.
However, they and even those in the intro need to be introduced even if they aren't around for long. As it gives me a sense of how to interpret the person's writing. This is import...
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