Interested in all types of stories. Started writing recently and using the website in order to receive feedback that will allow me to become a better writer. I will try my best to give good feedback and can only promise that I will give unbiased reviews but not necessarily professional level feedback.
Read a screenplay. If you read another script you will see what formatting should look like and why your script does not look how it’s supposed to. I would also look a little more into your characters and try and imbue them with more personality and character traits. When you define these personalities and make sure that the character’s dialogue matches the personality, the dialogue will seem more lively.