The Jaunt
short
What happens when you mix instantaneous teleportation with a child's curiosity?
Approved
Nominee
Draft #1
Draft #1
1 Reviews |
15 pages |
1 year ago
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Draft 1
Summary
From the twisted mind of Stephen King comes "The Jaunt".
A cautionary tale that explores the dangerous effects of instant teleportation through the eyes of one family and those who came before them.
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Here were my thoughts on your script:
1. Concept - Not necessarily original, but I do like you chose to do a rewrite of something from Stephen King of all people since a lot of his ideas were good and it paid off here with this.
2. Story - The story is kept simple for a good portion of the script. The best written section is definitely the ending because even though I was expecting something to go wrong, I wasn't expecting it in the way tha...
1. Concept - Not necessarily original, but I do like you chose to do a rewrite of something from Stephen King of all people since a lot of his ideas were good and it paid off here with this.
2. Story - The story is kept simple for a good portion of the script. The best written section is definitely the ending because even though I was expecting something to go wrong, I wasn't expecting it in the way tha...
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