From the twisted mind of Stephen King comes "The Jaunt".
A cautionary tale that explores the dangerous effects of instant teleportation through the eyes of one family and those who came before them.
1. Concept - Not necessarily original, but I do like you chose to do a rewrite of something from Stephen King of all people since a lot of his ideas were good and it paid off here with this.
2. Story - The story is kept simple for a good portion of the script. The best written section is definitely the ending because even though I was expecting something to go wrong, I wasn't expecting it in the way tha...
Having a night we've all had, Anthony strugglings to get his thoughts onto the page but as the night progresses he realizes that the story isn't the only thing inside him that needs to get out.
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