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The Jaunt short

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#Horror #Sci-Fi/Fantasy

What happens when you mix instantaneous teleportation with a child's curiosity?

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1 Reviews | 15 pages | 3 years ago | Draft 1
From the twisted mind of Stephen King comes "The Jaunt".
A cautionary tale that explores the dangerous effects of instant teleportation through the eyes of one family and those who came before them.

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Here were my thoughts on your script:

1. Concept - Not necessarily original, but I do like you chose to do a rewrite of something from Stephen King of all people since a lot of his ideas were good and it paid off here with this.

2. Story - The story is kept simple for a good portion of the script. The best written section is definitely the ending because even though I was expecting something to go wrong, I wasn't expecting it in the way tha...

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