Erez Bailen

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14
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10
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007: Origins: part one: Based on the story and characters of Ian Fleming short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
Logline: When Bond is just a teen, he does not expect his life to change.
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4 weeks ago
007: Origins: part one: Based on the story and characters of Ian Fleming short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
Logline: When Bond is just a teen, he does not expect his life to change.
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1 month ago
007: Origins: part one: Based on the story and characters of Ian Fleming short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
Logline: When Bond is just a teen, he does not expect his life to change.
Erez Bailen just purchased a review. Claim it here
1 month ago
007: Origins: part one: Based on the story and characters of Ian Fleming short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
Logline: When Bond is just a teen, he does not expect his life to change.
Erez Bailen just purchased a review. Claim it here
1 month ago
007: Origins: part one: Based on the story and characters of Ian Fleming short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
Logline: When Bond is just a teen, he does not expect his life to change.
Erez Bailen just claimed a review for a script.
1 month ago
Mad Talent short
Genre: Comedy,Horror
Logline: A schizophrenic man loses his sanity after his singing audition for a talent show goes wrong.
Erez Bailen just claimed a review for a script.
1 month ago
After Humans feature
Genre: Thriller
Logline: When three deformed bodies wash into an oil rig, a dissatisfied geologist battles her suppressive boss to launch a secret investigation into their puzzling origins.
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1 month ago
007: Origins: part one: Based on the story and characters of Ian Fleming short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
Logline: When Bond is just a teen, he does not expect his life to change.
Erez Bailen completed a review for
1 month ago
Our Last Days to Live feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Comedy,Horror
Review Rating:

The Screenplay is just mindless chatter, there is some direction, but none of the direction makes much sense. It is hard to read, because it isn’t written in screenplay format, if it isn’t written correctly then no one will be able to visualize the scenes. It really is hard to review this when I expect one thing and get a totally different thing. The truth of the matter is deception and bad writing don’t work well on this platform, if I’m going to see that a script is three pages, I expect three pages, if it’s more than that, with a hard to read story, then I can’t really write much about the story because I couldn’t finish it… I go for the short scripts because they are just more interesting and easier to read, and I get what I expect. You need to change the page count on Script mother and maybe use celtx.com to get the correct format for the script. The screenplay should have some action by the fourth or fifth page to engage the reader/viewer… The characters are boring, and the mother doesn’t have much life to her. It’s best to add some oomph to the way they speak, and not really be monotonous. There really could be more to this if I could read it all and understood it… but it was too long for me and too boring. Help others by fleshing out the characters, what they look like, what they like to do aside from skateboarding and videogames. Hopefully you understand this as an attempt to help and not an attack, because it’s not meant to be an attack, just harsh honesty.

Scripts

James Bond 007-Long Love Lost
Draft #5
Genre: Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
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Bond has a wild adventure ahead of him with his arch nemesis Blofeld.

Meat The Family + Meat My Uncle Short Story 37 pgs.
Draft #3
Genre: Action/Adventure,Comedy,Horror
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Have you ever wanted to know what's out there? This will tell you.

The Anti-Christ Kid
Draft #2
Genre: Mystery/Suspense,Thriller,Drama
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A ghostly, demon like X-Men type story with the beginning starts in a foggy day. Then a girl has an X-men demon type experience.

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007: Origins: part one: Based on the story and characters of Ian Fleming
Draft #1
Genre: Action/Adventure,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
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When Bond is just a teen, he does not expect his life to change.

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