Me being a guy who absolutely abhors men, I love the story and the concept is just a really amazing way to show that women are strong, even at their weakest moments. I found Jane to be just the kind of person I'd want as a mentor, I most probably won't be a rape victim anytime soon if ever, but this also works against bullies. I hope that if this does get filmed that it is an inspiration to all and a warning to any man thinking of hurting a woman. The structure is hard to keep up with because you jump between three or four different places in one action scene. There is a problem with the self-defense part in court law, self-defense means that if you are in danger, you can make it that the threat is finished, but continuing on till thy are all bloody and stone cold, that is considered assault and can send you to jail. Overall I love this script and hopefully it only gets high reviews, and if there is a man/self-hating woman, who is hating the screenplay and gives a bad review. don't take them to heart... stick with your dream of being an amazing women's advocate.