Overall, this story isn't essentially bad; it only needs a second draft. The philosophical conflict is almost enough, and the concept works quite well. The structure is the only one that needs to be improved a little more; ensure the resolution concludes the story and you're more than halfway there.
In Chicago’s Little Italy, Dom focuses on starting a fresh life. But, when a bookie looking to collect on his cousin’s debt gets violent, Dom must choose between salvation or sin.
Ginger has to flee to the Last Frontier when her boyfriend Freddy rips of his mob boss, a Colombian cartel, and a Pakistani pimp with poppy connections whose interests all intersect Alaska.
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