Overall, this story isn't essentially bad; it only needs a second draft. The philosophical conflict is almost enough, and the concept works quite well. The structure is the only one that needs to be improved a little more; ensure the resolution concludes the story and you're more than halfway there.
A Scientist develops robotic high-tech technology for three everyday unsung Heroes; a Paraplegic, a Man born with no arms and no legs and a War Hero... who team up to combat the crimes of Steel Town.
In 1958, a small town sharp-shooter becomes the third in a trio of female robbers, led by a violent, unpredictable psychopath, to pursue a foreseeable fortune along their road trip of crime and destruction.
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