Overall, this story isn't essentially bad; it only needs a second draft. The philosophical conflict is almost enough, and the concept works quite well. The structure is the only one that needs to be improved a little more; ensure the resolution concludes the story and you're more than halfway there.
A Scientist develops robotic high-tech technology for three everyday unsung Heroes; a Paraplegic, a Man born with no arms and no legs and a War Hero... who team up to combat the crimes of Steel Town.
When a high level black excutive is hired racism ensues. After he is falsly charged with embezlment he turns the tables on the company. He uncovers almost 18 million dollars in funds stolen funds from the nations police departments.
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