Overall, this story isn't essentially bad; it only needs a second draft. The philosophical conflict is almost enough, and the concept works quite well. The structure is the only one that needs to be improved a little more; ensure the resolution concludes the story and you're more than halfway there.
A hitman is tasked by a mobster to retrieve stolen cash from the cartel, and has to make it back across the border to stay safe... (old and incomplete)
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