Addicted
short
A man deals with the consequences of his addictions in his personal and work life.
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Draft #1
Draft #1
2 Reviews |
10 pages |
1 month ago
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Draft 1
Summary
Carl, a middle aged retail worker, struggles with the consequences and effects of his addictions in his everyday work life and his personal life up until the consequences grow too dire.
Contains explicit sexual content, graphic nudity, language and disturbing material.
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Overall, the story and character of Carl was bittersweet. He was just an average guy with an average job, but when his liver goes out, you find out all of this other stuff about him as a person right before the end. The fact that it ended right before we realize it and wanted to see what happens next with him and everything else, is what made it that way. It was over before it begun.
I think there is room for improvement here, only if you choose...
I think there is room for improvement here, only if you choose...
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Michael Kibler
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Good read. Very unusual concept but it was certainly interesting. I think if you focus more on the characters and the ending, it could be really good. But in conclusion, it's a pretty interesting and good script and I look forward to your future work.
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Marlon Schwiersch
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