Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
Four friends stumble upon a fortune following a seemingly trivial encounter with a French mobster. The violent game of cat and mouse that ensues changes their lives forever. How far will one go for Blue Diamonds?
The first conscious humanoid robot flees its creator’s illegal lab, evading the relentless pursuit of darkly competing Government and Corporate forces and a powerful Artificial Intelligence control system, discovering its personhood and inspiring the world to a brighter future for all.
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