Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
Sam, a directionless teenager on the fringes of Galway’s music and party scene, watches the world around her corrode — friendships, bodies, and belief systems melting into one blurred noise.
Lord Malcolm continues to capture Jedi from across the galaxy which causes Master Oscar and his Padawan Connor to go into hiding on the Planet Soiven. Meanwhile Master Marc Kena and his Padawan Chelsea Wilson search for the ancient Jedi and Sith scriptures before the Empire finds them
A rural mother fights an alien hive growing under her farm after it attempts to merge with her teenage son—igniting a battle that threatens to reshape life on Earth.
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