Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
A distraught, young man seeks revenge on a serial killer that is the estranged son of the police captain, who killed the young man’s parents 18 years ago.
A young man who survived a horrific childhood abduction hasn't dared leave home in 15 years, so his brother and an ominous doctor devise a plan to scare him out of his house, but when bizarre things start to happen, is it the work of his brother or is he beginning to lose his mind.
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