Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
Four friends stumble upon a fortune following a seemingly trivial encounter with a French mobster. The violent game of cat and mouse that ensues changes their lives forever. How far will one go for Blue Diamonds?
In the aftermath of a bombing in East Jerusalem and the looming shadow of a major war, Uri, the Mossad commander, unites with Ahlem, the Hezbollah commander, to combat ISIS terrorism.
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