Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
Gabriel lives in a world where people who commit henious crimes like murder, arson, etc. are sentenced with being put in front of live audiences as the style of play before shortly being executed. Gabriel is going to see his first show and it will change the course of his life forever.
When the elite S.T.A.R.S. team crash lands outside the mysterious Spencer Estate, they may have just found what is responsible for the cannibalistic murders plaguing Raccoon City.
In 1958, a small town sharp-shooter becomes the third in a trio of female robbers, led by a violent, unpredictable psychopath, to pursue a foreseeable fortune along their road trip of crime and destruction.
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