Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
During a business trip in Manhattan, a successful Swiss banker develops a romance with a much younger, naive bellhop while struggling to keep her violent fantasies from becoming reality.
In 1958, a small town sharp-shooter becomes the third in a trio of female robbers, led by a violent, unpredictable psychopath, to pursue a foreseeable fortune along their road trip of crime and destruction.
A young couple relocates to a new city which is gripped with mysterious serial killings. While dealing with homesickness and relationship troubles, they face off with a violent home invader.
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