Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
When a morally grey defense attorney’s dying brother gets arrested for arson in gentrifying Oakland, he must test his own definition of "right" while detectives uncover the truth behind the fires.
Told from 4 perspectives, 4 people travel to appear on a reality show to address their symptoms from the “Nightlight” tablet, a drug that cures insomnia, only to discover a devastating truth about themselves and the scientific trials conducted on them, that will turn their world upside down.
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