Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
Following a childhood trauma, a man who hasn’t stepped foot outside his home in 15 years starts to question his sanity as the only haven he knows transforms into a haunted house when his brother tries to force him out.
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