Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
Carrie's week is going miserably and camp doesn't seem to help. Neither does the fact that there's a killer loose on the campgrounds hellbent on being remembered by his childhood bullies.
When a morally grey defense attorney’s dying brother gets arrested for arson in gentrifying Oakland, he must test his own definition of "right" while detectives uncover the truth behind the fires.
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