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#Thriller #Horror #Mystery/Suspense

By David Kyle Anderson

A finalist in a prestigious playwriting competition struggles with defining reality when the things around her stop making sense.

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1 Reviews | 142 pages | 3 years ago | Draft 3

#meta #paranoia #female protagonist ##suspense #insanity ##psychological

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Psychological thriller is intriguing, but too drawn out

Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!

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