Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
After surviving genocide, enduring extreme Nazi forced labor and Allied bombings, a Ukrainian teenager must sacrifice his first love and risk his life to escape Stalin's forced labor, outwit a Soviet General, and return to his family. Inspired by a true story.
Under British-ruled Ireland, Irish Catholic servant Reanna O’Neil is forced to flee for her life when, in self-defense, she kills her attacker, a British noble. His son-in-law, hot on her heels and out for blood, will stop at nothing to “Make the Irish slattern pay!”.
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