Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
When her boyfriend is lured to Hollywood by a shadowy film company, a woman follows—only to find herself unraveling in a world where the line between family, fiction, and control begins to blur.
A FBI officer takes upon a homicide case unofficially when he finds it similar to his late wife's homicide meanwhile a young lady cop investigates a recent bomb explosion
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