Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
In the 1950s, a neurotic florist's strict routine is derailed after stumbling across a murder scene, and he's thrust into a conspiracy only his all-consuming obsession can unravel.
The first conscious humanoid robot flees its creator’s illegal lab, evading the relentless pursuit of darkly competing Government and Corporate forces and a powerful Artificial Intelligence control system, discovering its personhood and inspiring the world to a brighter future for all.
Carrie's week is going miserably and camp doesn't seem to help. Neither does the fact that there's a killer loose on the campgrounds hellbent on being remembered by his childhood bullies.
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