You finished a screenplay and that in itself is a big accomplishment but a screenplay is written for the sole purpose of becoming a movie. For that to happen, it must be read and this script is almost unreadable. Unfortunately, a reader would not get past page 5 because of the mistakes in spelling, grammar and format. The story and characters may be great but if the script doesn't get read, no one will know it. On page 2: eliminate camera direction "close up". That is a decision for the director or cinematographer. Page 3: "both watches" should be both watch. Capitalization of sounds, "BOOM", and "METEORITE" unnecessary. Only a distraction. "Rani opens up tent crawling out slowly.' Should be: "Rani slowly crawls out of her tent." "SCOUTER looks into a something unusual" should be " Scouter sees the meteorite has cracked open. You already capitalized scouter. Don't need to again. "We don't what it is" should be we don't know what it is. "Rani rushes into the crate", into should be to. "Rani gets closer, she flashes the small, alive thing comes out of the shell." Not sure what that is. Do not capitalize words in dialogue. "holds it. Then", should be "holds it then. No comma between cry and then. "campers goes" should be "campers go". Page 4: eliminate unnecessary transition directions. "Late 40s/Early 50s, four-eyed" Should be set apart by commas not parenthesis. Eliminate bne. Came should be come. It should be It's. No "the" in front of SETI. "do need" needs to be "do we need" I pointed out the mistakes on the first 4 pages to illustrate the care that must be taken to correct errors like that throughout the entire screenplay before publishing. Keep writing just be more careful correcting obvious mistakes. I would like to read this again without the mistakes. I promise your ratings will improve dramatically.