Matthias (Dark Star Prequel)
in the World Eden, A Father watches his family be slaughtered by demon. Back from the dead. The Father uses Satan's rage to face The Black King who opened the gates of Hell
Matthias Bay is a former knight for Lionheart Kingdom that retired so he could be with his Wife and three young children... On the night of Darkstar... Matthias watched his family be eaten by demons... He fought for his life but was eventually slain by Black Knights.... In Hell he was showed his wrath... Satan gives him his rage to kill the Black King... This is There first fight...
I found the jumping around confusing and didn't know if the black king was good or bad, Matthias seemed powerful yet not. The whole thing just made me dizzy and bored. I wanted to know how this all started, if it’s a prequel, it doesn’t seem to show background on anything. I never read a story that had a non-existent thought process. I hope that there is more to this and you didn’t just write this f...