The first half felt like a cliche urban legend camping horror movie. The characters I think could've been written better, because then it would make it easier for the viewers to care about them when they die. But the second half made it way better. Just reading I can see how dangerous and scary the hunter is. Also as a gore lover, the brutal kills really helped. Some other things I liked, I like the dialogue between characters, reading it, I can clearly see they are teenagers, and I'm thankful you didn't invent any weird lingo that a lot of teen movies like doing. I really like how The Hunter is only referred to as "The Hunter" instead of something like "The Ghost" or "Spirit" or something dumb like that. The Hunter actually feels like someone who could actually exist in real life. In conclusion, this is a pretty great script!