Marlon Schwiersch

Marlon S.

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The Photograph Draft #3

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One simple photograph can change a person's life, for better or worse.
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DINNER Draft #1

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A dinner between a man and a woman shouldn't usually go wrong...
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The Very Thought of You Draft #1

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An old man goes to the ends of the earth to fulfil a promise to his dead wife...
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An Accidental Courtesy Draft #1

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When the eight-year-old son of a white supremacist befriends and African American, he must struggle to keep his family and friend from finding out the truth of each other...
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GUNMAN Draft #1

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A hitman is tasked by a mobster to retrieve stolen cash from the cartel, and has to make it back across the border to stay safe... (old and incomplete)
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Apart - An Experimental Short Draft #2

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When the Protagonist's girlfriend breaks up with him, he deals with it by powering through five intense stages of grief...
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Dream Watching Draft #1

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A man named the Dream Watcher, who observes the dreams of others, is surprised when one dreamer actually sees him in her dream. Unsure as to why, he shows her through the dreams of others, blurring the line of what's real and what isn't.
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Atonement Draft #1

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A mother's son has been hit by a car and killed. After a month of grieving, a man comes to her house claiming he's responsible...
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MarlonSchwiersch
Marlon Schwiersch 7 hours ago

just claimed a review for a script.

A Saying in Iceland feature
Genre: Drama,Romance
When an impromptu trip goes horribly awry, a disheartened aspiring photographer develops a long distance relationship against the behest of his jealous ex-girlfriend.
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Marlon Schwiersch 4 weeks ago

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WINDFALL short
Genre: Comedy
A happy-go-lucky, karmic lottery ticket soars on wind gusts, intent on saving people during life threatening accidents. Even when scratched it continues to pay forward.
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Marlon Schwiersch 1 month ago

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Scam Likely short
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Family
Rating: 53%
It's a nice little comedic, and somewhat relatable scene about catfishing in the online world. Obviously there's not much for me to criticise as it's just a small scene, but one thing that bugs me right off the bat is the fact that they've been at it for 6 months... I don't know how this stuff works, so take it with a grain of salt, but I highly doubt any scammers would be that persistent and determined, it seems more likely that they'd just move on to the next target after a small time. Sometimes the dialogue sounds a tad unrealistic, or unnatural, and suffers from exposition such as "we've known each other for <insert time>." Although, this short could also be a nice addition in a much longer film, where we can empathise with our characters, and feel much more of a connection. It could even be a funny satire about dating in the online world. It can even help make your dialogue, as we can get much more context for what's happening, and don't need the characters to spout exposition. Either way, nicely done.
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Marlon Schwiersch 1 month ago

just claimed a review for a script.

Scam Likely short
Genre: Comedy,Romance,Family
A grandmother tries to convince her grandson to send money to an online boyfriend.
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Marlon Schwiersch 1 month ago

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Switched short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Family,Drama
Twins separate to escape a corrupted country.
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Marlon Schwiersch 1 month ago

just claimed a review for a script.

Jacobean Whiskey feature
Genre: Drama
A young clerk navigates through a dysfunctional accounting team on a 2020 film production helmed by a destructive director.
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Marlon Schwiersch 2 months ago

just claimed a review for a script.

PLEASE...... TAKE THE MONEY television
Genre: Comedy
After losing girlfriends for being insensitive, four jokester brothers strive to become girl magnets by using their winning Powerball formula to guide one needy person to change their life in exchange for the multimillion dollar jackpot. Inspired by the brothers behind www.lotterylogix.com
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