I am Carl television
#Animation #Action/Adventure
A teenage boy finds a backpack that allows him to teleport to different dimensions in the multiverse
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10 pages |
2 years ago
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Draft 1
A casual visit to the gelatine creatures turns into a rescue mission due to
a mixed breed monster of lion, bear and octopus. The huge monster
destroys many buildings and lives but due to the wise man’s help Carl
saves the day.
a mixed breed monster of lion, bear and octopus. The huge monster
destroys many buildings and lives but due to the wise man’s help Carl
saves the day.
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Overall, this script has some of the laziest writing I've ever seen. Never have I seen a script so baffling in every element of screenwriting. That being said, it's clear the writer has a big imagination, of very strange monsters and worlds. I suggest the writer reads scripts, reads books on screenwriting and improve more on their screenwriting, and then I think they can make a good script, but this is not it.
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