James Odulaja

James O.

Ranking
Stock Character
Reviewer Rating
Scripts
13
Reviews
4

SCREENPLAYS

The Elements E01

The Elements E01 Draft #2 television

Sign In to see % Rating
A group of four elemental based superpowered individuals are assembled by Jordan O'Brien to thwart The Illuminati's plan of a New World Order.
Sign In to see % Rating
Hawk and Dove E01 "In The Beginning"

Hawk and Dove E01 "In The Beginning" Draft #1 television

Sign In to see % Rating
Through the trials and sorrows of their past, Hank and Don are united by destiny and become Hawk and Dove to fight crime.
Sign In to see % Rating
My Ordinary Life

My Ordinary Life Draft #2 television

Sign In to see % Rating
A charismatic, unassuming, born-again Christian attracts a popular playful sophomore to Christ.
Sign In to see % Rating
Never Again

Never Again Draft #1 television

Sign In to see % Rating
A righteous man, Noah, is called by God to build an ark to be saved from a flood.
Sign In to see % Rating
In The Beginning

In The Beginning Draft #2 television

Sign In to see % Rating
What God did before creating the world.
Sign In to see % Rating
Away 2

Away 2 Draft #1 feature

Sign In to see % Rating
After being released from a psychiatric clinic, Dwayne is on a one-track mission to get revenge against the supernatural forces of Moonlight Ridge.
Sign In to see % Rating
Spiritual Awakening

Spiritual Awakening Draft #2 feature

Sign In to see % Rating
Through the trials and tribulations of being a teenage drug-dealer in the South-side of Chicago, Edris Johnson repents and gives his life to Christ.
Sign In to see % Rating
Reviews
Neighbor Watch
After Humans
Icon of the Defender
SVF: Reborn (Final Draft)
Following
Activity
JamesOdulaja profile pic
James Odulaja 2 months ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

Spiritual Awakening cover image
Spiritual Awakening feature
Genre: Drama,Thriller,Romance
Through the trials and tribulations of being a teenage drug-dealer in the South-side of Chicago, Edris Johnson repents and gives his life to Christ.
JamesOdulaja profile pic
James Odulaja 1 year ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

Spiritual Awakening cover image
Spiritual Awakening feature
Genre: Drama,Thriller,Romance
Through the trials and tribulations of being a teenage drug-dealer in the South-side of Chicago, Edris Johnson repents and gives his life to Christ.
JamesOdulaja profile pic
James Odulaja 1 year ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

Spiritual Awakening cover image
Spiritual Awakening feature
Genre: Drama,Thriller,Romance
Through the trials and tribulations of being a teenage drug-dealer in the South-side of Chicago, Edris Johnson repents and gives his life to Christ.
JamesOdulaja profile pic
James Odulaja 1 year ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

In The Beginning cover image
In The Beginning television
Genre: Drama,Horror,Action/Adventure
What God did before creating the world.
JamesOdulaja profile pic
James Odulaja 1 year ago

completed a review for

Neighbor Watch cover image
Neighbor Watch feature
Genre: Mystery/Suspense,Comedy,Crime
Rating: 60%
These are areas to improve Transition between Scenes: Some transitions between scenes could be smoother. For example, when Randy finds the manila envelope, the transition to the court letter feels a bit abrupt. Adding smoother transitions or visual cues can enhance the flow. Visual Descriptions: While the screenplay provides detailed descriptions of the characters and settings, there's room to enhance visual elements. Consider incorporating more visual cues to help the reader visualize the scenes vividly. Character Arcs: The character arcs for Nia and Randy are well-developed, but there could be additional exploration of supporting characters' arcs, such as Bill and Rachel. This can add more depth to the overall narrative. Consistency: Ensure consistency in character actions and reactions. For instance, Vince's sudden violent actions might feel a bit surprising without clearer foreshadowing or hints throughout the story. Cohesiveness: While the mix of genres (mystery, romance, crime) is interesting, make sure that the tonal shifts are handled smoothly to maintain cohesiveness. Overall, the script sets up multiple characters, relationships, and potential conflicts within the neighborhood, providing a foundation for further development. The theme of community dynamics, security, and individual struggles is established, promising a mix of drama and humor.
JamesOdulaja profile pic
James Odulaja 1 year ago

just claimed a review for a script.

Neighbor Watch cover image
Neighbor Watch feature
Genre: Mystery/Suspense,Comedy,Crime
Suburban residents form a Neighborhood Watch after a string of burglaries and watch more of each other than the neighborhood.
JamesOdulaja profile pic
James Odulaja 1 year ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

Spiritual Awakening cover image
Spiritual Awakening feature
Genre: Drama,Thriller,Romance
Through the trials and tribulations of being a teenage drug-dealer in the South-side of Chicago, Edris Johnson repents and gives his life to Christ.
JamesOdulaja profile pic
James Odulaja 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

Spiritual Awakening cover image
Spiritual Awakening feature
Genre: Drama,Thriller,Romance
Through the trials and tribulations of being a teenage drug-dealer in the South-side of Chicago, Edris Johnson repents and gives his life to Christ.
JamesOdulaja profile pic
James Odulaja 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

Away 2 cover image
Away 2 feature
Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Romance
After being released from a psychiatric clinic, Dwayne is on a one-track mission to get revenge against the supernatural forces of Moonlight Ridge.
JamesOdulaja profile pic
James Odulaja 1 year ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

Never Again cover image
Never Again television
Genre: Action/Adventure,History,Drama
A righteous man, Noah, is called by God to build an ark to be saved from a flood.