Lief Johnson

Lief J.

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Deus Machinae Draft #2

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When four college students go missing, a young intelligence operative is thrust into the most confusing and downright disturbing case she's ever had the (mis)pleasure of working on. But is reality all it seems?
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LiefJohnson
Lief Johnson 2 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

Club Wars Ep1: Pink Poms television
Genre: Family,Comedy
An outcast wants to fit in a club but is met with opposition from the club's current president.
LiefJohnson
Lief Johnson 2 years ago

uploaded a script.

Deus Machinae feature
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Thriller
When four college students go missing, a young intelligence operative is thrust into the most confusing and downright disturbing case she's ever had the (mis)pleasure of working on. But is reality all it seems?
LiefJohnson
Lief Johnson 6 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

Nutmeg feature
Genre: Comedy
An unconventional therapist who finds he better understands his patients while tripping on nutmeg must now diagnose and cure an apocalyptic disorder known as metapsychosis, as his increasingly psychedelic journey makes it difficult to discern the real from the unreal.
LiefJohnson
Lief Johnson 6 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

The Return feature
Genre: Thriller
After a girl is taken, a police officer comes home to help find her. She was on leave because she was taken, too. Now she's hunting the killer that hunted her.
LiefJohnson
Lief Johnson 6 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

Westphall television
Genre: Comedy
A simple background character from a sitcom learns that his television world is just one of many.
LiefJohnson
Lief Johnson 6 years ago

uploaded a script.

Matryoshka feature
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
When corrupt officials mix with the supernatural, it's bound to get interesting.
LiefJohnson
Lief Johnson 6 years ago

completed a review for

Finding Milana short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Rating: 60%
This is a really cool concept, but to be fair, it does have its cliches, specifically the "parent doing anything to save their child" cliche. The first few pages really dragged me in. You cut right to the action from line one, which I really enjoyed. The scenes flowed nicely, and I didn't find myself having to backtrack to figure out what was going on. The use of somewhat minimal dialogue is a nice touch, it really keeps the focus on the action, and not on some wisecrack or something. The only real complaint about flow is it seems too slow near the end. Just my opinion, anyway. I thought the ending was really sweet, even if it leaves some questions to be answered. This was a very good read, and I think if you made those improvements you'd be ready to shoot!
LiefJohnson
Lief Johnson 6 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

Finding Milana short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
How Far Will a Father Go For His Daughter's Soul?
LiefJohnson
Lief Johnson 6 years ago

just joined ScriptMother!