I know this is supposed to be for a mini-outline but I really would like another pair of eyes to look over this to see if I'm on the right track. I'm kind of sick of looking at this draft at the moment.
I liked this quite a bit. It's a lot better than most of the scripts I've read on here. I still stand that this should be much longer and have a bigger story and the flesh the characters out more. But other than that, good job.
As an orphaned daughter of the famous archaeologist tries to solve on her own a mysterious accident in London’s Tube, she accidentally sabotages the international jewel robbery plotted by the criminal mastermind, The Colonel.
A young cop goes undercover at a local high school to investigate a deadly new drug and quickly finds himself involved with a gang run by a former classmate.
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