The script was terrible, it was just meh. The writer had wonderful intentions, no doubt. However, the script could use a little work. I know that its listed as a short screenplay. There is nothing wrong with that at all. However, I think could potentially become a feature film. Sometimes shorts end up becoming feature films. The very first "SAW" is a prime example of a short film ending up becoming a huge franchise. The structure of the script was fair. The dialogue was fair. Yes, I had a few laughs. But still, I don't think the script is long enough. Maybe there is something that I'm missing here. If so, I would like to know. The writer of this script indeed worked very hard, and I give the writer credit for making an effort to impress me. Would I like to see more from this writer? The answer......... IS YES!
Meet Bentley Enzo Maguire a mobster that has Autism. He is going to help the FBI take the only family he ever knows The Donato Crime Family