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#Drama #War #Romance

Charlie Salotto is returning from his 4th and final tour of duty over in Afghanistan. He's about to face the battle of his personal life, PTSD.

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1 Reviews | 96 pages | 2 years ago | Draft 1
a fast paced war drama

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I ran out of time to do a full read of the script. Try adding more time for reviews.

1) You dialog is unrealistic. I do not read scripts, I put them in a text to speech program and listen to the script. You need to do the same. Close you eyes and hear the voices. Do they sound different? Is everyone using the same words? Are you putting in exposition instead of dialog?

2) You have people going into someone back yard and trying to start a r...

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