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A well structure and interesting concept that has a good baseline for an interesting and gripping drama.

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On reading to Log Line I was hesitant regarding a cow that saves a farm and unfortunately with only 30 pages to read I was unable to get an idea of how the story would progress. I would interested to see how the story progress as the dialogue and characters where very good.

When I wake up by Valentin Aleksandrov

#Thriller #Mystery/Suspense

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A good descriptive script but poor dialogue delivery.

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Glen Smith 2 years ago

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Henchmen television

Genre: Comedy

Ever wondered what the life of a Henchmen is like, when your boss is trying to take over the world and all you want to do is drink coffee and not killed by the the an inept secret agent.

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Glen Smith 2 years ago

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Poppy seeds Part 1 short

Genre: Drama

Rating: 80%

Overall I liked it, a really good start and gripping enough to want to read on and see how the story pans out, I enjoyed the introduction to the protagonists back story and look forward to getting to know them better and experiencing how they progress as the story proceeds. The other characters we are introduced to have longevity and are interesting enough to want to know how their relationship develops with the lead already which can be a challenge when writing and feel a loyalty to the protagonist, the other characters are as important to allow the lead to grow and develop an interesting and inviting story for the reader/watcher.

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Poppy seeds Part 1 short

Genre: Drama

A florist wants to win a gardening contest but is sabotaged by her neighbor.

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Henchmen television

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Glen Smith 2 years ago

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Henchmen television

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Glen Smith 2 years ago

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Cowspiracy Ep 1 television

Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy

Rating: 67%

I would very much like to read more from this writer, they have a natural style and have displayed that they have written before and have talent. I would still be interested to find out how the story progresses and how the story works around a cow and what its powers are. The writer has demonstrated a good level of skill and a natural flow.

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Cowspiracy Ep 1 television

Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy

The birth of a baby cow produces hope for a struggling farmer but also an unforseen detrimental magic

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Glen Smith 2 years ago

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When I wake up television

Genre: Thriller,Mystery/Suspense

Rating: 13%

Overall I felt that the concept did not grip me, it was laboured with poor dialogue in places. There are missing words and spelling mistakes. The descriptions of places and people were very good and I feel that the writer is a novelist or story writer and not a script writer. Re-visit it and work on the dialogue, listen to how people talk and understand military speak and references, this can be achieved by watching military and police films or series. Things like 'We have lost comms with Alpha 2 and 3' if people are using radio's than they are using call signs. Think about making the dialogue more stick and following, the use of 'beat' was overpowering and distracting, it is down to the actor to deliver the speech and trust a beat will be used naturally when a dialogue is underway.

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Glen Smith 2 years ago

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When I wake up television

Genre: Thriller,Mystery/Suspense

When a boy starts having memories from other people's lives he finds out he was part of a secret project that wanted to create a perfect killer artificially but he managed to escape. Will he stand against the project or become what they created him to be?

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Glen Smith 2 years ago

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When I wake up television

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