Clay von Carlowitz
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A washed-up B-movie actor becomes the prime suspect in a murder case when his indie filmmaker friend turns up dead.
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During the pandemic, a writer flees the city with his wife and brother to a cabin Upstate - and encounters a murderous cult.
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Clay von Carlowitz 3 years ago

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The Klingsor Initiates feature
Genre: Action/Adventure
When a madman tries to overthrow the U.S. with the supernatural power of a Crucifixion relic, an athletic TV newsman uses his unusual talents to battle him, in action-packed confrontations and chases.

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Mad Talent short
Genre: Comedy,Horror
A schizophrenic man loses his sanity after his singing audition for a talent show goes wrong.

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We'll Be Safe Up There feature
Genre: Horror,Thriller
During the pandemic, a writer flees the city with his wife and brother to a cabin Upstate - and encounters a murderous cult.

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We'll Be Safe Up There feature
Genre: Horror,Thriller
During the pandemic, a writer flees the city with his wife and brother to a cabin Upstate - and encounters a murderous cult.

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We'll Be Safe Up There feature
Genre: Horror,Thriller
During the pandemic, a writer flees the city with his wife and brother to a cabin Upstate - and encounters a murderous cult.

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We'll Be Safe Up There feature
Genre: Horror,Thriller
During the pandemic, a writer flees the city with his wife and brother to a cabin Upstate - and encounters a murderous cult.

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We'll Be Safe Up There feature
Genre: Horror,Thriller
During the pandemic, a writer flees the city with his wife and brother to a cabin Upstate - and encounters a murderous cult.

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Character Actor feature
Genre: Thriller
A washed-up B-movie actor becomes the prime suspect in a murder case when his indie filmmaker friend turns up dead.

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Clay von Carlowitz 3 years ago

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15 feature
Genre: Horror,Mystery/Suspense,Thriller
Rating: 73%
It’s been a long time since I’ve read a thriller this consistently compelling. Your setup is deceptively simple: show us part of a tragic event, flash forward to the apparent victim’s attempt at living a life, give him a fun love interest, a caring family member and concerned doctor and cue the weird stuff. Brilliant! I’m in! Here’s where you set yourself apart: you craft a very believable story of trauma, and through the escalation of events, you deliver a thrilling journey while deepening our understanding of and empathy for our protagonist. Borrowing from classic Hitchcock scenarios, you maximize tension from the confines of one location, but you do so with imagination and a clear love for the genre. I admit I was skeptical about a revelation involving an elaborate ruse, but you brilliantly flip that twist by connecting it to the pivotal moment so prominent in Adrian’s mind. None of this would work if you didn’t have likable characters, and yours are so dynamic, I felt like I knew them right away. Raz, in particular, infused the story with much-needed humor and levity in general. It was a real treat seeing her coax Adrian to come out of his shell. Adrian himself was delightfully neurotic. I did wonder at times why he spoke the way he did, but I eventually got used to it and assumed it was a tick stemming from his obsession with control and specificity. As a guy who often writes stories featuring brother characters, I appreciated the interplay between Adrian and Barton. Their scenes feel authentic, and even though the ending reveals the nightmarish nature of what we’ve seen, the detail about Adrian’s happy life helped to preserve the character journey’s integrity. Only minor notes I have for you involve some grammatical and spelling errors. Other than that, great job. On a personal note, as an actor, if I had the chance, I’d audition for this in a heartbeat. You moved me and managed to thrill me at the same time. No easy feat.

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Clay von Carlowitz 3 years ago

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15 feature
Genre: Horror,Mystery/Suspense,Thriller
A young man who survived a horrific childhood abduction hasn't dared leave home in 15 years, so his brother and an ominous doctor devise a plan to scare him out of his house, but when bizarre things start to happen, is it the work of his brother or is he beginning to lose his mind.