Instead of giving my traditional feedback on these shorts saying it should be longer, I'll pass on that. You do have a decent concept here with the girl who I'm going to assume is a teenager (It's never stated how old she is) relearning herself that the true beauty will come from the inside. and that in turn works well for a short skit. One thing I will say though is in the beginning when we first are introduced to Mary, our protagonist here, des...
She is one week away from a wedding she had in her mind since she was 15. Every thing is set. All that’s left is her fiancé and groomsmen to fly from California, and her step father from Puerto Rico. What could go wrong? It’s Sunday, September 10, 2001.
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