I liked the script its very well executed, the 1st 3 pages says if your script your script is a well executed. I liked the fact that the introduction was starts through a lower pace but you kept the pace. The fact that it was a roller coaster ride. I liked the friendship between Richard & Josh. It remined me of the seth rogen & james franco & all those movies that they did. But I liked how both of the characters are the heart & soul of the story. I also thought at the mid Josh might die but he did not so its above my expectations. I liked the way you give dept to Robert character, though he was born in an orphanage he did not grow up killing people like Chain Breaker, Josh is the buddy come side kick, I liked the fact he not only supports his friend but is no nonsense of a character. My only suggestion is at the end if you could make Michelle die, which could have made the story more dramatic. You can make a scene at the end just at the end when the chain breaker kills Michelle but both Josh & Richard are unable to save her. you can make the scene bloody if you want, though you have much command in the action lines. But I enjoyed reading the script & best wishes on future projects.