So, the script is listed as a comedy, the problem is that it isn’t funny. It has a compelling concept but the pros really end there. So what I most recommend you work on is telling an actually effective story with believable and emotionally compelling characters before adding in a bunch of jokes. Aside from that, you have a few formatting and spelling mistakes all over the place which is also why I recommend reading your script over and out loud....
A romantic man proposes to his girlfriend of 7 years on a mountain, but the soon to be bride then jumps off the cliff to her death. It is a tale of revenge and justice.
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