Lookout short
#Drama
By
Andrew
Cross
A fire lookout hears of the news of his fiancé's passing while alone atop a mountain.
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23 pages |
2 years ago
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Draft 2
After a fire lookout makes the trek up to the lookout cabin he receives a radio call from his supervisor informing him that his fiancé has died of a drug overdose. Due to weather he can't make it back down and as such as to begin his grieving process alone in a cabin atop a mountain.
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Great characterization and interesting story. Continuity within plot needs tightening.
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