Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
It is up to the Retired CIA Agent David Storm and Ex Navy Seal Jason Rightton to find and kill the terrorist group who kidnapped the president daughter and stop them from releasing the nukes.
A hitman is tasked by a mobster to retrieve stolen cash from the cartel, and has to make it back across the border to stay safe... (old and incomplete)
Two DEA agents chase a suspect into the forest and stumble upon an urban legend, now they must survive the night and expose the terrifying truth behind the urban legend.
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