Overall, this was a decent first draft for a psychological thriller. I would mainly focus on cutting the script down some, especially on any unnecessary scenes and filler dialogue. Good luck!
A hitman is tasked by a mobster to retrieve stolen cash from the cartel, and has to make it back across the border to stay safe... (old and incomplete)
A mythology professor with OCD begins to shed his repetitive routines, but when monsters invade his gated community, he suspects his neurotic behaviors may actually be rituals intended to ward off an ancient supernatural force.
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