My goal is to become a Screenwriter/ Director and make films of my own!
Such an interesting concept. The story starts out fairly simple and fast paced, which works out very well in this case due to the twist ending. With that being said, woah, what a chilling twist. It really goes to show that a simple story paired with a twist such as the one used really helps make short stories one of the more interesting ways of conveying emotions to readers in a very efficient way. I feel that this is due to the dreary mood that you managed to make the reader feel straight at the getgo of the story. That along with the comeback of the watch at the end, it really puts a certain mindset (that helps a lot) with the flow of the story. The dialogue really makes the characters feel real which helps me visualize the setting a bit more in my head. Out of all of this, my favorite choice of yours is starting off WITH the twist character, that is what I believe makes the twist so chilling. Very good job!
After his wife and daughter are abducted by six masked men who terrorize villages, a determined man embarks on a mission to save them, but little does he know that there'll be losses and horrendous encounters along the way
Brad, a mildly successful actor, must go back through his past when he receives a random letter from his father. What he doesn’t know is that he is unknowingly heading back into a life he left for a reason