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Grey Hounds (Pilot Episode) v1 television

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A TV Pilot Screenplay draft about three barhoppers living their daily lives and trying to make it in the world.

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1 Reviews | 31 pages | 1 year ago | Draft 2
A group of three friends gets in trouble with their parking and try to make the best of their bad night out.

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Overall this is a solid start to the story, but I wished more happened with this first episode between the characters, and it felt like this could fit into a 10-minute short. Work on the dialogue along with some parts of the story and try to spice it up with things that happen with characters and how it will affect what is yet to come. So far, this is solid but needs some work in specific areas like dialogue and story. Concept and Characters deve...

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