Ryan Shorttails

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Grey Hounds (Pilot Episode) v1

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A TV Pilot Screenplay draft about three barhoppers living their daily lives and trying to make it in the world.
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Grey Hounds (Pilot Episode) v2

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A TV Pilot Screenplay draft about three barhoppers living their daily lives and trying to make it.
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Grey Hounds Epidsode 2 Draft

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A TV Episode Screenplay draft about three barhoppers living their daily lives and trying to make it in the world.
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The Show Must Go On
Tooth Ferē
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Ryan Shorttails 1 year ago

just claimed a review for a script.

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Never Again television
Genre: Action/Adventure,History,Drama
A righteous man, Noah, is called by God to build an ark to be saved from a flood.
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Ryan Shorttails 1 year ago

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Grey Hounds Epidsode 2 Draft television
Genre: Comedy
A TV Episode Screenplay draft about three barhoppers living their daily lives and trying to make it in the world.
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Grey Hounds (Pilot Episode) v1 television
Genre: Comedy
A TV Pilot Screenplay draft about three barhoppers living their daily lives and trying to make it in the world.
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Ryan Shorttails 1 year ago

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The Show Must Go On feature
Genre: Drama,Horror,Thriller
Rating: 80%
Overall, The Show Must Go On is a spectacle for the reader and the viewer! It is one of those stories where not everything needs to make sense, yet the eeriness of the final scenes and the false catch towards the end makes the read even more exciting, which will look even better if this were made into a film. The pop culture references and the methods by which prisoners are actually executed midway remind me of medieval or coliseum shows yet the futuristic devices that are scattered throughout the film make the film seem to elude a bit to the film BladeRunner. The last thing I want to note about this work is that there is a huge shift of writing that takes place between the first show that Elizabeth attends and the rest of the work. It’s as if there is a completely different writer writing it which makes it all the more interesting.
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Ryan Shorttails 1 year ago

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Tooth Ferē feature
Genre: Animation,Family,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Rating: 67%
The ending feels a bit rushed, it almost seems like the story is given a bad ending where the villains truly won, yet the climax of the script is basically a dentist appointment with Faye being forced to sacrifice her teeth to "stabilize the fairy realm", when in reality, the climax is Faye getting her wisdom teeth removed. The family drama between Faye and her parents over the new therapy office Faye seems to open seems like a good place to build on. A few more pages of this where the teeth get more in-depth appointments would be a nice addition to the world-building. Feels like a great world to build on, yet the ending doesn't really make much sense since Faye is already a tooth therapist. The suspense and the buildup of the final appointment is similar to how such an appointment is intensified in real life. Overall a very imaginative tale with lots of good world-building!
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Ryan Shorttails 1 year ago

just claimed a review for a script.

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The Show Must Go On feature
Genre: Drama,Horror,Thriller
Gabriel lives in a world where people who commit henious crimes like murder, arson, etc. are sentenced with being put in front of live audiences as the style of play before shortly being executed. Gabriel is going to see his first show and it will change the course of his life forever.
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Ryan Shorttails 1 year ago

just claimed a review for a script.

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The Show Must Go On feature
Genre: Drama,Horror,Thriller
Gabriel lives in a world where people who commit henious crimes like murder, arson, etc. are sentenced with being put in front of live audiences as the style of play before shortly being executed. Gabriel is going to see his first show and it will change the course of his life forever.
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Ryan Shorttails 1 year ago

just claimed a review for a script.

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PEACEWALKER feature
Genre: Mystery/Suspense,Romance,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Peacewalker walks for peace, which makes his murder all the more shocking. What? Why? Who? Can the questions be answered? Or are there just more questions?
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Ryan Shorttails 1 year ago

just claimed a review for a script.

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The Show Must Go On feature
Genre: Drama,Horror,Thriller
Gabriel lives in a world where people who commit henious crimes like murder, arson, etc. are sentenced with being put in front of live audiences as the style of play before shortly being executed. Gabriel is going to see his first show and it will change the course of his life forever.
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Ryan Shorttails 1 year ago

just claimed a review for a script.

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Tooth Ferē feature
Genre: Animation,Family,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
When a tooth skips processing in an attempt to get home, he sets off a dangerous chain of events that threatens to destroy the entire fairy realm unless the the Tooth Fairy can retrieve the tooth before it's too late.