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When Wendla meets her brother's new friends, Wendla and her friend Hanschen embark on a journey of exploring their sexuality and worldview up against the gritty reality of 1977 West Berlin.

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1 Reviews | 78 pages | 2 years ago | Draft 1
In the spring of 1977, Wendla and Hanschen meet her brother, Otto's new university friends. Hanschen meets Ernst a quiet somewhat reserved boy from a small village and Wendla meets Melchior a guy who grew up with a harsh worldview. As they get to know each other better both pairs fall in love expanding their worldviews while sadly being oblivious to the harsh world that surrounds them.

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It is a cute story overall, but I feel that there needs to be more of a conflict and/or threat to the characters and their respective relationships with one another. Someone told me for one of my reviews, "Tell it in another way." I think that is what might need to be done here. There needs to be more work done here, but I think it will be worth it. Good luck on your script going forward.

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