Karen Acklee

Karen A.

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Metal Firecracker Draft #1

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A rich woman and poor man have a mutual attraction. They just can't get in sync.
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Karen Acklee 9 months ago

just claimed a review for a script.

All Men Suck feature
Genre: Comedy,Drama
A depressed, drug addicted woman, gets involved with a shady couple, who set her on a path to destruction.
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Karen Acklee 1 year ago

just claimed a review for a script.

Just the Six of Us television
Genre: Comedy
The Lubbock sisters, suddenly reunited, try to make a better future by reconnecting with their past.
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Karen Acklee 1 year ago

just claimed a review for a script.

The Unexplained short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Thriller
A young man must complete a task for a mysterious magician or be turned into a deer.
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Karen Acklee 1 year ago

completed a review for

If I Had Possession short
Genre: Horror
Rating: 27%
This had one very nice piece, which you should utilize to rewrite this properly. That's Robert asking "What about my fame?" to which the devil should just smile, and then there can be clips of every blues player who ripped him off, including Clapton and Page. You concentrate on the dialogue to tell your story. If you centered the story around Robert, you could have things like Robert and Martha being too friendly and Dave's jealous looks. Think visually not through dialogue. The overall problem is, it's not a horror story. It's the life of Robert Johnson. In the end, if Johnson's in hell being tortured, he's not at a Clapton concert. The movie Crossroads used a twist to the story. You need to find that twist, or make this so entertaining we're not looking for one. That "thing" is sold in that one line "What about my fame?" That's what this is and should be about.
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Karen Acklee 1 year ago

just claimed a review for a script.

If I Had Possession short
Genre: Horror
A deal made by a struggling musician for fame and prowess comes to a halt when it's time for him to pay up.
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Karen Acklee 1 year ago

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Metal Firecracker feature
Genre: Drama,Comedy,Romance
A rich woman and poor man have a mutual attraction. They just can't get in sync.
KarenAcklee
Karen Acklee 1 year ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

Metal Firecracker feature
Genre: Drama,Comedy,Romance
A rich woman and poor man have a mutual attraction. They just can't get in sync.