David Serra

David S.

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Monster Fever Draft #3

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An ill young man gets an unexpected visit from a closet monster.
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A Fracture in Nature Draft #5

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A young man and his friends try to survive the carnage strange creatures, regenerated by an alien experiment, bring to a small town.
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Night Lasers Draft #1

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A young man and his friend engage in a tense game of laser tag with lizard-like aliens.
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The Christmas Quest (First 22 Pages) Draft #2

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A tomboyish reindeer must save the world from a malevolent entity who wants to bring chaos to Christmas.
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The Pizza Parlor Draft #1

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A troubled young man, trying to reconnect with his estranged girlfriend, must get through to her new boyfriend first.
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The Unexplained Draft #1

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A young man must complete a task for a mysterious magician or be turned into a deer.
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DavidSerra
David Serra 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

The Unexplained short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Thriller
A young man must complete a task for a mysterious magician or be turned into a deer.
DavidSerra
David Serra 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

The Pizza Parlor short
Genre: Horror,Thriller,Drama
A troubled young man, trying to reconnect with his estranged girlfriend, must get through to her new boyfriend first.
DavidSerra
David Serra 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

The Christmas Quest (First 22 Pages) feature
Genre: Animation,Action/Adventure,Family
A tomboyish reindeer must save the world from a malevolent entity who wants to bring chaos to Christmas.
DavidSerra
David Serra 3 years ago

completed a review for

SVF: Reborn (First 15) short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Thriller
Rating: 73%
Hello, I myself am a horror fan and this I really liked. I appreciate horror stories that go all the way with its genre. Obviously a few things grammar wise need working on. Such as put a hyphen in between late teens (late-teens). Also your script descriptions can be smoothened such as: Faint footsteps are heard, distracting the beast from finishing its meal Try Faint footsteps distract the beast from it’s meal. Also, on your headings, such as INT. DUNGEON remember to add NIGHT or DAY at the end of it. Ex: INT. DUNGEON - NIGHT. Your story reminded me a lot of old classic horror movies and that’s a good thing. I hope you continue to work on this with future drafts, I look forward to reading more and see what you do with it in the future. Good luck with your writing and hope you keep at it.
DavidSerra
David Serra 3 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

SVF: Reborn (First 15) short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Thriller
Slaying demons and kicking ass are his specialty.
DavidSerra
David Serra 3 years ago

uploaded a script.

The Christmas Quest short
Genre: Animation,Family
A tomboyish reindeer, who wants to save a life, finally gets her wish.
DavidSerra
David Serra 3 years ago

uploaded a script.

Night Lasers short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Thriller
A young man and his friend engage in a tense game of laser tag with lizard-like aliens.
DavidSerra
David Serra 3 years ago

uploaded a script.

The Dreamscape Aquarium short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Family
A young boy dreams of an exotic aquarium in order to cope with stress.
DavidSerra
David Serra 4 years ago

uploaded a script.

A Fracture in Nature feature
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Thriller
A young man and his friends try to survive the carnage strange creatures, regenerated by an alien experiment, bring to a small town.
DavidSerra
David Serra 4 years ago

uploaded a script.

Monster Fever short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
An ill young man gets an unexpected visit from a closet monster.