Jonathan Medeiros

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Three friends on their way to a wedding must do battle with a deranged officer in 1980's New England
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Wasted Time
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Jonathan Medeiros 3 years ago

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Genre: Horror
Three friends on their way to a wedding must do battle with a deranged officer in 1980's New England
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Jonathan Medeiros 3 years ago

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Genre: Comedy,Drama
Rating: 7%
Thank you for sharing your screenplay. My reviews are generally blunt and this will be no exception. Unfortunately it's quite hard to read and evaluate as it's absolutely filled with errors. There are spelling and grammar errors in nearly every page. Some of the errors are so bad that I don't understand what you're trying to communicate. It occurs to me that English may not be your first language. If that's the case I recommend partnering with someone. The problem with all of these errors is that it takes me completely out of it as a reader. It becomes impossible to be engrossed in the story and, in some cases, even to follow it. If English is your 2nd language it's certainly impressive that you've written a screenplay, but I can't really consider that in an evaluation. I strongly recommend proofreading your script before asking someone to take time out of their day to provide you with feedback. I'd also recommend reading a couple of books about screenwriting to give you a better idea of structure. Until you have a solid story in place this will remain a frustrating read. The premise does hold some promise, but it's up to you to deliver on it. Right now you haven't.
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Genre: Horror
Three friends on their way to a wedding must do battle with a deranged officer in 1980's New England
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Jonathan Medeiros 3 years ago

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Genre: Comedy,Drama
Tensions escalate as an inexperienced filmmaker tries to make a documentary about a self-proclaimed time-traveler with a catch, he has no way of proving it.
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Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Thriller
Slaying demons and kicking ass are his specialty.
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Jonathan Medeiros 3 years ago

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Genre: Horror
Three friends on their way to a wedding must do battle with a deranged officer in 1980's New England
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Jonathan Medeiros 3 years ago

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