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Pablo Conseco Hernandez Diaz

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Drama
Thriller
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Reviewer Rating:
Scripts: 13
Reviews: 22

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Pablo Conseco Hernandez Diaz just claimed a review for a script.
2 months ago
THE VANDERBOLTS feature
Genre: Comedy,Crime
Logline: His father wants him to follow in his footsteps... but those footsteps lead to murder.
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6 months ago
Inner City Blues feature
Genre: Drama
Logline: On the last day of his life, Trey maneuvers through the socio-economics, systemic racism, and hood politics of living (and dying) in Southside Jamaica, Queens
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8 months ago
Inner City Blues feature
Genre: Drama
Logline: On the last day of his life, Trey maneuvers through the socio-economics, systemic racism, and hood politics of living (and dying) in Southside Jamaica, Queens
Pablo Conseco Hernandez Diaz uploaded a script.
8 months ago
The Supremes (act 1 of 4) feature
Genre: Drama
Logline: The hardships Sidnie and his mother, Hattie endured during his adolescence thread themselves in his every action, paving the way for the heartbreak he goes through when he has to fly home to NY after finding out she's terminal with cancer.
Pablo Conseco Hernandez Diaz completed a review for
8 months ago
Halifax: Attack on the Lemon Heads television
Genre: Comedy,Drama,History
Review Rating:

- Although the idea is original, the execution and characterization of the story weren't so much - A part of the appeal to a period piece is the vernacular of the people within the story. There's a missed opportunity for a ton of comedy to be written in as nods to the distinct weirdness in some of that old English syntax - Understanding that this is the pilot, there will be a plethora of character introductions, but there felt like too much focus on peripheral characters and not enough development (both story and character-wise) with the main cast - Having 3 plot lines that loosely overlay with character and no real tie in with the stakes at hand makes for a lot of moments that feel like setups with no ultimate payoff - The opening monologue by Anton didn't add anything to the story or plot making it feel forced and only there for the sake of the clever dick joke. Sans that dialogue the scene is a lot tighter and makes the first page that much more intense - This issue plays into a larger, recurring one throughout where the characters are just standing around talking about everything instead of it being shown or them actually doing it - Think that something like Orton's 'impossible' joke [10.8] that takes up 6 lines could be shortened to a few punchier lines like, "Wrong. You see impossible, I see loose possibilities" - 2 pages of a pretty much strictly dialogue is a hard to swallow. If the dialogue is absolutely necessary there still needs to be action throughout. Have characters physically show their differences instead of just outright saying it

Pablo Conseco Hernandez Diaz just claimed a review for a script.
8 months ago
Halifax: Attack on the Lemon Heads television
Genre: Comedy,Drama,History
Logline: A 16th century executioner must face the consequences of yet another botched execution, all while avoiding to be a pawn within a secret organizations game.
Pablo Conseco Hernandez Diaz just claimed a review for a script.
8 months ago
Tidal High television
Genre: Drama,Comedy,Family
Logline: Welcome to Tidal High, where drama is always happing. Follow along with Jacob, Mason, Holly and Ruby as they navigate their way through high school with their teacher Courtney Garcia.
Pablo Conseco Hernandez Diaz uploaded a script.
10 months ago
Voices You Can't Ignore short
Genre: Horror
Logline: Having a night we've all had, Anthony strugglings to get his thoughts onto the page but as the night progresses he realizes that the story isn't the only thing inside him that needs to get out.
Pablo Conseco Hernandez Diaz just claimed a review for a script.
10 months ago
Brother Margaret feature
Genre: Action/Adventure
Logline: On the night of a blood moon, an undead monk comes to a shopping mall to revenge himself upon his vampiric kin.
Pablo Conseco Hernandez Diaz just claimed a review for a script.
1 year ago
Moving Day feature
Genre: Comedy,Horror,Mystery/Suspense
Logline: In an alternate reality a young couple's weekend stay at a small town hotel reveals bigger secrets that the town has been hiding.

Scripts

Lily
Draft #3
Genre: Drama
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A young woman finds out that the biological father she's never known is terminally ill. One of his final requests is to see her before he passes.

Jé Rouge
Draft #1
Genre: Horror
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An older sister cries wolf to terrify her younger brother, but she quickly comes to realize that there may actually be something to be afraid of.

Inner City Blues
Draft #5
Genre: Drama
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On the last day of his life, Trey maneuvers through the socio-economics, systemic racism, and hood politics of living (and dying) in Southside Jamaica, Queens

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Mister
Draft #2
Genre: Drama
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... She gets ready for Mister.

Voices You Can't Ignore
Draft #1
Genre: Horror
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Having a night we've all had, Anthony strugglings to get his thoughts onto the page but as the night progresses he realizes that the story isn't the only thing inside him that needs to get out.

The Supremes (act 1 of 4)
Draft #1
Genre: Drama
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The hardships Sidnie and his mother, Hattie endured during his adolescence thread themselves in his every action, paving the way for the heartbreak he goes through when he has to fly home to NY after finding out she's terminal with cancer.

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