Alexandar McCulloch

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Halifax: Attack on the Lemon Heads Draft #1

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A 16th century executioner must face the consequences of yet another botched execution, all while avoiding to be a pawn within a secret organizations game.
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Alexandar McCulloch 4 years ago

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Halifax: Attack on the Lemon Heads television
Genre: Comedy,Drama,History
A 16th century executioner must face the consequences of yet another botched execution, all while avoiding to be a pawn within a secret organizations game.
AlexandarMcCulloch
Alexandar McCulloch 4 years ago

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Booksy Bear short
Genre: Animation,Comedy
Rating: 27%
My first reaction to reading this is to ask, who is the audience? This seems to be a children's cartoon, but has many mature moments, especially with dialogue. Including guns in cartoons, especially in today's climate, is difficult to pull off, and this story doesn't pull it off. I don't see how this dialogue would resonate with children as well. Booksy is cynical and self-describes as anti-social. We've seen these types of characters in cartoons before, so we know they can work. In this instance, I think it would be wise to pair him off with a character that can provide balance. Chippy might be that character but is unable to speak. I suggest giving them a voice. If you wish not to do that, then his actions need to be his dialogue. They should be specific, concise, and let the audience know exactly what he is saying. This may be difficult however if he is to balance some of the complex personality traits of Booksy.
AlexandarMcCulloch
Alexandar McCulloch 4 years ago

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Booksy Bear short
Genre: Animation,Comedy
A cynical, introverted bear named Booksy tries to avoid the world around him, despite wanting to be part of it.
AlexandarMcCulloch
Alexandar McCulloch 4 years ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

Halifax: Attack on the Lemon Heads television
Genre: Comedy,Drama,History
A 16th century executioner must face the consequences of yet another botched execution, all while avoiding to be a pawn within a secret organizations game.
AlexandarMcCulloch
Alexandar McCulloch 4 years ago

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Halifax: Attack on the Lemon Heads television
Genre: Comedy,Drama,History
A 16th century executioner must face the consequences of yet another botched execution, all while avoiding to be a pawn within a secret organizations game.
AlexandarMcCulloch
Alexandar McCulloch 4 years ago

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