Elizabeth Johnson

Elizabeth J.

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Slayers: The Next Generation Draft #2

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A teenaged Zoe Wood, daughter of Faith and Robin, takes on her role as a Slayer and continues the fight against evil while trying her best to maintain a social life and carry on her family's legacy.
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Slayers: Episode Two Draft #2

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A teenaged Zoe Wood, daughter of Faith and Robin, takes on her role as a Slayer and continues the fight against evil while trying her best to maintain a social life and carry on her family's legacy.
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ElizabethJohnson
Elizabeth Johnson 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

Slayers: Episode Two television
Genre: Horror,Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Drama
A teenaged Zoe Wood, daughter of Faith and Robin, takes on her role as a Slayer and continues the fight against evil while trying her best to maintain a social life and carry on her family's legacy.
ElizabethJohnson
Elizabeth Johnson 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

Slayers: Episode Two television
Genre: Horror,Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Drama
A teenaged Zoe Wood, daughter of Faith and Robin, takes on her role as a Slayer and continues the fight against evil while trying her best to maintain a social life and carry on her family's legacy.
ElizabethJohnson
Elizabeth Johnson 1 year ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

Slayers: The Next Generation television
Genre: Horror,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
A teenaged Zoe Wood, daughter of Faith and Robin, takes on her role as a Slayer and continues the fight against evil while trying her best to maintain a social life and carry on her family's legacy.
ElizabethJohnson
Elizabeth Johnson 1 year ago

uploaded a script.

Slayers: The Next Generation television
Genre: Horror,Mystery/Suspense,Drama
A teenaged Zoe Wood, daughter of Faith and Robin, takes on her role as a Slayer and continues the fight against evil while trying her best to maintain a social life and carry on her family's legacy.
ElizabethJohnson
Elizabeth Johnson 2 years ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

Slayers: The Next Generation television
Genre: Horror,Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Drama
A teenaged Zoe Wood, daughter of Faith and Robin, takes on her role as a Slayer and continues the fight against evil while trying her best to maintain a social life and carry on her family's legacy.
ElizabethJohnson
Elizabeth Johnson 2 years ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

Slayers: The Next Generation television
Genre: Horror,Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Drama
A teenaged Zoe Wood, daughter of Faith and Robin, takes on her role as a Slayer and continues the fight against evil while trying her best to maintain a social life and carry on her family's legacy.
ElizabethJohnson
Elizabeth Johnson 2 years ago

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Monster Fever short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Rating: 7%
It was really too short to judge, but the concept was good. The dialogue was poor and we go into the script thinking the Creature is going after Tyler, so when our expectations aren't met, it's a disappointment. Grammar was okay, but it was missing a few commas in the dialogue. There wasn't enough room or time to develop Tyler, all we really know about him is that he's sick with the flu. If you want to grab the reader's attention, you have to give us more character. I think if this script was longer, you would have more of a chance to develop it, but the reader is left feeling unsatisfied and wondering what the point of the Creature even was, whose house he was meant to go to and whether it was even real or part of Tyler's fever dream.
ElizabethJohnson
Elizabeth Johnson 2 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

Monster Fever short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
An ill young man gets an unexpected visit from a closet monster.
ElizabethJohnson
Elizabeth Johnson 2 years ago

just purchased a review. Claim it here

Slayers: The Next Generation television
Genre: Horror,Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Drama
A teenaged Zoe Wood, daughter of Faith and Robin, takes on her role as a Slayer and continues the fight against evil while trying her best to maintain a social life and carry on her family's legacy.
ElizabethJohnson
Elizabeth Johnson 2 years ago

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Apartment 07 Pilot television
Genre: Comedy,Animation
Rating: 7%
Good idea, the roommate idea is quite popular with sitcoms, but the script and the writing wasn't strong enough. Concept was okay, but didn't play out well in the story. Spelling errors on the very first page and the jokes felt forced, especially in the flashback scene. Characters were underdeveloped, no introductions given, and RJ and Clementine's attraction towards each other seemed to come out of nowhere. Romance has to come naturally, between two characters who compel you to put them together, even if it's something you never thought of. Think of your favorite show and the relationships - there's drama, right? On again-off again, fights and make-ups, moments where they hate each other but also moments where they don't want to be around anyone else but each other? Stephen King said that he lets his characters talk to him and lead their way through his novels. You'll come across other writers who will tell you the same, me included. The dialogue was forced and spelling consisted of something one might use in text messages (i.e.. hehehehe, wazzup). If this was to be sold, this would be a huge turnoff for any professional agent or writer. Let the dialogue come naturally. Think of how you talk to your family, friends. Be sure to make the dialogue consistent with each character as well. Make sure each character is fully developed and has their own personality, and stick to it for the whole story. Once each character is developed, it will come easily, so easily you'll hear them speaking each line as you type it out. Consider going back and taking a look at TV scripts from your favorite sitcom to get an idea of formatting, dialogue and character development and relationships. I also recommend professional writing software to help format, keep track of ideas and characters and ensure spelling errors are eliminated. These have helped me immensely.