Samuel Nkwume

Samuel N.

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Game Of Fear Draft #1

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A haunted, agoraphobic teen, must confront his fear of the outside world, in order to reveal the truth behind the mysterious death of a family member.
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Samuel Nkwume 2 years ago

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Game Of Fear feature
Genre: Thriller
A haunted, agoraphobic teen, must confront his fear of the outside world, in order to reveal the truth behind the mysterious death of a family member.
SamuelNkwume
Samuel Nkwume 2 years ago

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SVF: Reborn (First 15) short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Thriller
Rating: 33%
Concept: The concept seems a bit different from your regular immortality based story. The start was a bit gripping and the fight was too. Story: Although the story establishes the main character early, it’s quite clear what the objective is, but It did keep me engaged to want to find out. Structure: your structure formatting was well done painting a good picture of each scene, but the main character seems to lack an obstacle, I’m sure this will be addressed as the story progresses. Dialogue: well written in my opinion, it sounded realistic and genuine. Character development: This is the one area I might come down hardest one as the story is too short to establish proper character development. I assume I might still, but as I am only reviewing what I have read, I have to point it out. In conclusion an interesting story developing, I hope it gets its conclusion.
SamuelNkwume
Samuel Nkwume 2 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

SVF: Reborn (First 15) short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Horror,Thriller
Slaying demons and kicking ass are his specialty.
SamuelNkwume
Samuel Nkwume 2 years ago

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The Wonderful Wizard of Oz feature
Genre: Family,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Rating: 67%
Concept : The Wizard of Oz is always a famous narrative with wonderful and fascinating characters, however this makes me worry about the concept's originality, since it leaves me wondering if your story is distinct from the others. After finishing the script, I observed that the tale was exactly as I recalled it, which, although not innovative, was still a wonderful story that I liked reading. Story: The story of a protagonist trying to find her way home while going through other adventures is quick and exciting to follow. In her journey to return home, Dorothy makes several wonderful friends in Oz and even wins the hearts of the Oz people. Structure: The tale's structure and formatting are excellent, and the story made excellent use of space, compressing the story into such a little number of pages demonstrates strong writing, considering the story is very long to read. I believe I'll expand on this in the part on character development. Dialogue : The lines are amusing and well-written; each character's dialogue represents who they are and what they lack, giving each character a realistic feel. Character development : Dorothy's character development from wanting to go home to wanting to assist the Tin Man, Scarecrow, and the people of Oz despite overwhelming obstacles demonstrates a strong grasp of character development, such as the Tin Man exhibiting emotion for Dorothy despite his lack of a heart. A major Plus for being able to demonstrate that in a limited number of pages. Finally, as previously said, the story of Oz is a great example of superb tale telling, character development, and comedy. A GOOD READ.
SamuelNkwume
Samuel Nkwume 2 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

Babes in Toyland feature
Genre: Family,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
When their miserly uncle attempts to steal their inheritance, a lad and his sister partake in an unforgettable adventure.
SamuelNkwume
Samuel Nkwume 2 years ago

just claimed a review for a script.

The Wonderful Wizard of Oz feature
Genre: Family,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
After a tornado transports a Kansas farmgirl to a magic land, she must go a find a wizard to return home.
SamuelNkwume
Samuel Nkwume 2 years ago

uploaded a script.

Game Of Fear feature
Genre: Thriller
A haunted, agoraphobic teen, must confront his fear of the outside world, in order to reveal the truth behind the mysterious death of a family member.
SamuelNkwume
Samuel Nkwume 2 years ago

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