Concept : The Wizard of Oz is always a famous narrative with wonderful and fascinating characters, however this makes me worry about the concept's originality, since it leaves me wondering if your story is distinct from the others. After finishing the script, I observed that the tale was exactly as I recalled it, which, although not innovative, was still a wonderful story that I liked reading.
Story: The story of a protagonist trying to find her way home while going through other adventures is quick and exciting to follow. In her journey to return home, Dorothy makes several wonderful friends in Oz and even wins the hearts of the Oz people.
Structure: The tale's structure and formatting are excellent, and the story made excellent use of space, compressing the story into such a little number of pages demonstrates strong writing, considering the story is very long to read. I believe I'll expand on this in the part on character development.
Dialogue : The lines are amusing and well-written; each character's dialogue represents who they are and what they lack, giving each character a realistic feel.
Character development : Dorothy's character development from wanting to go home to wanting to assist the Tin Man, Scarecrow, and the people of Oz despite overwhelming obstacles demonstrates a strong grasp of character development, such as the Tin Man exhibiting emotion for Dorothy despite his lack of a heart. A major Plus for being able to demonstrate that in a limited number of pages.
Finally, as previously said, the story of Oz is a great example of superb tale telling, character development, and comedy. A GOOD READ.
