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WL Wright

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I've written several screenplays from shorts, TV pilots and features as well as over 33 short stories and 6 novels. I participate in screenplay competitions and have scripts in several of them. I won a log line contest on one of my first and have one of my thriller tv pilots still ranking #3 on Coverfly's red list. I also had a short story published. I write on...


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Scripts: 3
Reviews: 6

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WL Wright completed a review for
1 year ago
Mercy television
Genre: Crime,Drama,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
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I enjoyed this story and it was an easy read, obviously you have skills. I didn't realize it was a TV pilot until after I finished it, I thought it was a short. Either way I like the imagery of it being in purgatory and the mythical beings including your descriptions because I am a fan of all things sci fi and fantasy, period. I don't know about the long haul on the TV series idea because it seems you have set it up for most go to hell from that point and I am not sure how long that would hold my attention, sad stories all going to hell. But hey I don't know your long term vision and as said I like the story you wrote. The character Levi is a sad demon it seems longing for love and longing for a better win rate that seems impossible given the story I read and he has to continuously bear that and has become suicidal over it all. Maybe the way to resolve that doomed fate vision is to add a case he miraculously wins after the one he loses? Just a thought on that idea but I think without doing that the whole long haul is relentlessly sad and depressing for a TV series. That's what I am left with after reading what has been written thus far. I liked Hannah, Nova and the prosecutors you described and overall I had zero issues with your writing. It is creatively written with all the descriptions so the reader has the total vision without anything necessary being left out. I watched this movie by reading your script so I think you nailed that part. You also have all the rules of script writing down that is obvious and cheers to you for that as well. This might make a good feature if you can write it out giving Levi something big as his next case that as said, in the end, he may or may not get the win. Once again, just a thought on it. Good luck and write on...

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1 year ago
Mercy television
Genre: Crime,Drama,Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Logline: 
In the afterlife between afterlives, a cynical demon attorney and a mysterious crime lord must join forces in the pursuit of redemption and revenge.
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1 year ago
Hell's Ecstasy short
Genre: Horror
Logline: Barry and his friends are ready for a great bachelor party until it goes beyond ecstasy.
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1 year ago
THE MISSION short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Logline: Callista is teamed up with Bentry on the planet Jupiter and everything seems normal, for now.
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1 year ago
Hell's Ecstasy short
Genre: Horror
Logline: Barry and his friends are ready for a great bachelor party until it goes beyond ecstasy.
WL Wright just claimed a review for a script.
1 year ago
Meat The Family + Meat My Uncle Short Story 37 pgs. short
Genre: Action/Adventure,Comedy,Horror
Logline: Have you ever wanted to know what's out there? This will tell you.
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1 year ago
Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles - Project: Dimension X feature
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy,Action/Adventure,Comedy
Logline: The young turtles must adapt quickly to overcome a foe from their fathers past, who has discovered powerful new weapons for his thirst of destruction. Combining each ones strength, they will undertake their final test to try and save not one, but endless worlds.
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1 year ago
THE MISSION short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Logline: Callista is teamed up with Bentry on the planet Jupiter and everything seems normal, for now.
WL Wright uploaded a script.
1 year ago
THE MISSION short
Genre: Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Logline: Callista is teamed up with Bentry on the planet Jupiter and everything seems normal, for now.