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While caring for a 10-year-old orphan, an impoverished pessimist tries to keep a homeless shelter he unlawfully occupies from being demolished so the residents won't be evicted.

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1 Reviews | 93 pages | 2 years ago | Draft 2
Rick, pessimistic, impoverished and desperate, must discover a way to keep the homeless shelter he runs from being demolished. When a 10-year-old orphan named Sky comes into his care, his perspective on what life can truly be starts to change.

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The diamond in the rough of this is the relationship between Rick, Zoe, and Sky. Everything else is kind of useless. A dramatic retelling of the inciting incident and subplots could and should be done. Rebuild the world in which they live and around their relationships. Good luck in your future drafts.

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