Michael and his friends decide to go on a camping trip to a place where people don't dare to go because of the mythical legend known as "The Hunter." But little do Michael and his friends know that some legends are too horrifying not to be true.
Rated R for horror violence/terror.
I liked your opening scene description, but from what I've been told by writers
much better than myself, you're supposed to keep the scene description more sparse.
I believe this is so the directors are not hampered in their creative vision
when adapting a story for the screen.
How is the audience able to tell that the picture of Michael...
Your dialog is very stiff and unnatural sounding. The conversations do not seem like ones real people would have. Try reading them aloud when you review it yourself and see what I mean. Very st...
There might be some weaknesses in your script, with as one example, but I cannot detect them.
It may be short bu...
So Michael doesn't really have an arc just yet in your short. He's depressed, then he's wit...
I'm personally not a huge fan of slasher flicks because of the lack of character development of the antagonist, or something that feels forced or useless. But, I feel that you can develop something with them as well as the other characters to make it much better.